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I loved this. I loved how Brian was very protective of her and how he went against his father loved it xxxx

First off I will like to say that I love the setting of the story... While reading it images of the 6th century or so kept running through my mind. Love it!.. The ending was sad but yet it made sense... i mean it was a forbidden love and there was no way she was going to live not matter what. Infinity points :)

I've come to realization that you will not leave your characters live happily ever after in any of your stories!! Anyway, I love this oneshot! It was so different than the others!!:)

@ TheGirlSynKnows
no i didnt hate the ending! i just freaked out that she died!

I love this but oh my god the ending was so sad :-( I'm seeing Papa Gates doing that and it's just not computing.

@ bohemianfapsody
Haha thank you. I know papa gates wouldn't but I hope you don't mean you hated it haha

@ BornForVengeance
Haha I'm glad you liked it. I hoped it was different to other stories so thanks for that. Thank you so much for your amazing comment!

it was very well written, but god the ending was horrible. imagine papa gates doing that...

Comment virginity woo! OH MY GOD THIS WAS SO EMOTIONAL! I like the ye olde angle- it's very different to the other fanfics I've read. Also, Brian's a sweetheart, his dad's a dick, and I can't believe she died...is she dead? I think so. SO GOOD :)