Cancer - Comments

Oh my gosh babe! I just read this story and I don't know if I have words for how I fee right now! That was so sad! I could feel Melody's pain! And the fact that Brian passed when she had blacked out was just so sad knowing she would never see the love of her life again! She wasnt there to hold his hand as he took his last breath! I just :( How sad! You did a fabulous job writing this and I am glad you were able to get your fears for your cousin out at the time! Luckily 5 years later I know that he is okay now! I loved it!

wow
this story is amazing.
its so sad but it was amazing.

Wow...
Don't take this as sarcasm but I really am touched because my grandad died last year from cancer and I find it sad that I felt nothing for him. And I know that alot more people are going to die in my life from cancer and it just makes me stop and think that maybe I should feel a little bit of sympathy for cancer victims.

Thankyou so much.

:o Aww that was such a sad story. Their last conversation was an argument.
Very sad. But I loved it. It shows that you have versatility in your writing style and it was very good.

I took your one-shot's comment board virginity.