Good Love - Comments

I was looking through some of the stories I had read, and decided to revisit this one because I loved it so much. I only read the second chapter, but it was still just as wonderful as the first. You're very descriptive and very complete and precise in what you say.

I wish I were as discriptive as you; I'm too impatient to get to the point. Anyway; I love this, like UGH it's so good

Your writing is so passionate. I can't stop reading it... it's like poetry.

I love this...

I like this quite a lot.

This is so cute! (Normally, I would not have read it, but that's the magiic of comment swap.)
Anyways, I love how subtly Gerard moves forward. It's amazing how you weave them like you do. Good development, good pace. The quote at the beginning was a great choice and really reflects well on the story.
Anyways, keep up the good writing! :)

This is interesting. Seems like Sienna and Gerard are both mysterious in their own little ways. I like the little descriptions, it's set a good scene. Plus the layout is a nice touch. Looking forward to reading more.

This is so wonderfully emotive. I love the forbidden/taboo aspect of it. Gerard's subtle advances make me squirm and grin all at the same time. I don't know how I feel about this yet.

But! But. I really can't wait to see where you go with this. Please update soon.

<3 this that is all