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  • actuallycapamerica

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    Oh, I loved this! I only wish there was more! I absolutely love Niall stories, he reminds me greatly of my friend nick, who may or may not be a future relationship, dependably on if I go crazy or not. Okay, sorry for spamming your comment with that interesting side-bit, I'll just let you continue with your night/morning. Amazing work! <3
    April 6th, 2013 at 09:00am
  • Caitosaur.

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    THIS WAS REALLY CUTE
    And I think I only noticed one typo which was something to do with hair dye in one of the earlier chapters and everything's so fluffy and nice and what a good note to go to bed on. ^__^
    November 19th, 2012 at 09:21am
  • Caitosaur.

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    I totally was going to go to bed after the 10th chapter because I have shit to do but then drama and I'm already at the 15th and am like internally alternating between fangirling and dying and so I figured I'll just finish the story tonight because that girl in comments said it's over and so I won't just be reading to get annoyed when I find out the story isn't over yet.
    November 19th, 2012 at 09:07am
  • DaniGates

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    I am just lost for words that can describe all the feels I have right now. I fucking adore Niall. I love Jazmine and Rachel seemed like a right bitch, but grew on me towards the end. Nonny is such a sweetheart.

    Oh, and I love Harry in here. He's always looking out for his friends. I just have so many feels right now. I don't know if I want to shag Harry or Niall right now.

    This was a superb story and I couldn't get enough of it. I wish it hadn't ended so quickly. I really enjoyed the drama and the make ups. It was simply lovely.
    November 13th, 2012 at 07:04am
  • Lawliet.

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    WAIT THIS IS OVER? I HAD NO IDEA IT WAS GOING TO BE OVER SO QUICKLY ASDFGHJK;
    IT WAS AMAZING. I LOVED IT. I LOVE YOUR WRITING. THANK YOU.
    November 12th, 2012 at 12:47am
  • Kelseylynnf

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    I just read this entire story in one sitting and wow; it was incredible.
    My Niall feels are through the roof! Haha.
    Ahhhh I just can't get over how amazing this was.
    I wish it wasn't over :( lol
    November 11th, 2012 at 07:18pm
  • lost.words

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    OH MY GOD BECKY LOOK AT THIS STORY. Its so amazing. I can't believe its over :(
    November 11th, 2012 at 07:16am
  • Little Robyn;

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    This, my darling, has been one of my favorite stories that I've ever read. Jazmine's sheer desperation at the beginning, her evolving relationship with Niall, who you wrote beautifully, was absolutely amazing. I can't even believe that this was as amazing as it was, but since it's your writing, I'm not surprised it tuned out so perfectly.
    November 11th, 2012 at 06:53am
  • maribaylock

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    ITS OVER WHAT WHAT WUT nooooo :((( Im going to miss this story so much!!!!:( It was amazing and i looked forward to reading each new chapter so much! i dont know how i will survive without it:((
    November 11th, 2012 at 06:12am
  • We-Go-Down-Fighting

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    Ugh. I know I haven't commented on either of your stories in a few chapters, but I have been reading your fabulous writing. I PROMISE. :) And I'm ssoooowwwyyy. I hope you can forgive me. So that our children can continue living in a stable home. Hahahaha

    Anyways, I figured this chapter would be the last one when I started reading it, but I didn't want to accept it. At all. I could read your writing forever and that would be fine by me.

    "Sounds like the American dream," "But it's the Jazmine dream." Was my favorite moment out of this whole chapter. Because it's like this whole story all Jazmine was striving for was for her life to go smoothly, and finally, she gets what she's always wanted. It's an emotional moment. :'( Waaaaa.

    I could go on and on. But I won't for the sake of everyone. Iloveyoubye.
    November 11th, 2012 at 05:30am
  • Juno

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    i'm so glad that she opened up to niall and worked through all her insecurities and issues with rachel to get where she ended.
    this was absolutely perfect.
    *sigh* thanks for writing it!
    November 11th, 2012 at 03:26am
  • taylooooooooooor

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    sequal? please? pretty please? Cry
    November 11th, 2012 at 02:11am
  • teenage hearts

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    Oh my gosh...

    First off, that was such a brilliant chapter! :') Rachael and Caroline are just so adorable and I'm glad that she found someone and her Nonny approving Niall and Jazzy..!! 
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    And then I realized that it was the end.
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    Then I realized that it was such an amazing story and alsjdihsbsl! 
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    There. SO FREAKING AMAZING. *dies*
    November 11th, 2012 at 01:23am
  • paint.it.black.

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    awwww sadness. but I will not leave a last thought becauseeeee.....Sequel? :D
    November 10th, 2012 at 08:38pm
  • salvatore.

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    It's so bittersweet knowing this story has come to a close :(
    What a lovely way to end it, though. I'm so happy for Jazzy and Niall, hehe. And Rachel and Caroline and everyone ahhhh!!!
    November 10th, 2012 at 08:04pm
  • GoodGirl;

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    I've been having a shit bad day, but this helped me!! I love this chapetr and I'm sad to see this story end! I'm pretty sure it's the first one you started after I met you!!
    November 10th, 2012 at 07:46pm
  • ProudThespian

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    Noooo!!!!! It can't be over! :/ This story was absolutely amazing and cute and just one of the best Niall stories I have read.

    I am going to miss it dearly :/ <3
    November 10th, 2012 at 07:41pm
  • teenage hearts

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    This is absolutely fantastic and everything is just falling into place. Ha, Rachael seems so flipping in love. Niall biting his tongue and his cheeky thoughts...ahaha. Over all, well done! :)

    Oh and IlistenedtotheleakedsongsokayhateonmebutIsimplycouldntwaitokay? Anyway, I've heard like five of the songs and I'm liking their new sound. Definitely more mature but I was hoping for some ballads? Ha, stupid Little Things making me crave ballads.
    November 9th, 2012 at 03:31am
  • SpencerG

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    Oh my glob!! Yes!! You go Glen Coco!! Rehab for you!!
    And I hate when I bite my tongue and I feel like I literally bite a chunk off. I freak out for a minute and in my head I'm just like: "Oh my fucking glob! I'll be the first person that bites their own tongue off." *laughs*

    But I've been streaming the album since Niall tweeted the link and I'm in love!! I love how Niall and Lou get more solos. And is it just me or the first album like: "Hey babe. You're beautiful. Go on a date with me?" But Take Me Home is like: "I already told you that you're beautiful. Now get in my bed." Is that just me?
    November 8th, 2012 at 03:58am
  • Lawliet.

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    Yay! So happy for both of them :)
    November 7th, 2012 at 10:04pm