What You Want Me To - Comments

  • Caitosaur.

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    How does a story go about getting more recommendations than comments?! That's never made sense to me. That means that every person who has recommended it hasn't even commented once.
    PEOPLE PLEASE.
    January 18th, 2013 at 08:36am
  • Hipsterism

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    Aw this chapter is so cute. I love Louis and his attitude towards Sedona. :)
    October 1st, 2012 at 08:18am
  • honeyjoons

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    I can't with Sedona's humor and view on the world. I completely relate and she's basically me.
    October 1st, 2012 at 06:32am
  • show me love

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    Ohh, Sedona... you make me laugh haha.
    October 1st, 2012 at 06:28am
  • kaylelle

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    PAH! Louis is such a prick in this and it's hilarious.
    October 1st, 2012 at 04:29am
  • Lawliet.

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    Oh my god, Sedona is amazing. Love her. And that was a great update, I don't know what you're talking about. Update again soon?
    October 1st, 2012 at 03:19am
  • dawn of light

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    Lewis...emphasizing his name just to tick him off. Hahah oh I love this girl!

    The ending was classic. Hehe I had survived 18 years on my own. I could survive another 70. She will fall in love with Louis sooner or later. I just hope she realizes it soon. :)
    October 1st, 2012 at 03:18am
  • Juno

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    This us awesome. I love sedona.
    She's a keeper
    October 1st, 2012 at 02:53am
  • honeyjoons

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    Ugh can Louis take me out to dinner. I mean really.
    But I quite enjoy this. Sedona is basically me, minus the not dating Louis part. Especially the whole 'I was a bitter person who didn’t particularly enjoy people.' That's me all around lol.
    Anywho, I enjoy this so far and I can't wait for more.
    September 29th, 2012 at 11:19pm
  • show me love

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    I like this story so far! (: Can't wait to read more of it.
    September 23rd, 2012 at 08:24pm
  • dawn of light

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    I told you my name; it’s only courteous that you tell me yours." Oh, Louis! GET SOME. Haha. Such a gentleman. :)

    I like Sedona. Her personality is quite unique. She's so live and daring. I can't wait to see how she progress through the story. :)
    September 17th, 2012 at 05:28am
  • kaylelle

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    Haha I love Sedona so far. This is gonna be great :)
    September 17th, 2012 at 05:27am
  • Lawliet.

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    Awesome chapter! Ohh I love Sedona: "It was customers like him and their annoying antics and personality traits that made me want to gather everyone on the planet and strangle the human race as a whole." haha absolutely love it! update soon?
    September 17th, 2012 at 03:16am
  • Juno

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    Baha tell him sedona. Tell him good.
    September 17th, 2012 at 02:36am
  • iron and wine.

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    I already love this!
    And Sedona is such a pretty and unique name. I really love it, as well as the story c;
    September 17th, 2012 at 02:18am
  • young volcanoes

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    I love Sedona's character so far. I can't wait for more of the story!
    September 17th, 2012 at 01:59am
  • Little Robyn;

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    This is really great :) I love the name Sedona and I love her character so far! I'm glad you love the layout :) It's one of my favorites :) Great chapter!
    September 17th, 2012 at 01:41am
  • Lawliet.

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    This seems interesting - update soon :)
    September 16th, 2012 at 05:56am
  • dawn of light

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    I like the chapter title. Haha. Very nice!
    September 16th, 2012 at 05:45am
  • honeyjoons

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    Ahh I'm so excited for this!! I already know it's going to be fab!
    September 16th, 2012 at 05:41am