Always - Comments

I was reading this while listening to Mona Lisa. lol! XD This was beautiful.

Beautiful :)

First off, this is really great! I love how you interpreted the picture :)
I'm so glad Brendon finally phoned Ryan and actually spoke to him! I would have been devastated if there hadn't been even a little bit of Ryden action haha :')
Your idea is great; I wouldn't have thought to do a Ryden fanfic from the photo but you pulled it off.
The layout is nice, a little too plain for my liking, though it does complement the story.
I love your writing style! It's really elegant and descriptive but still interesting with the dialogue.
Overall, this is wonderful! And you get extra points for being the first to send in their entry :D

i like it.