Rebel From Another World - Comments

YESSS!! FUCK YEA! i missed Vlad!!! his the bes him and danny really are good to her, should put a super wist at he ened where he didnt love her!! XD keep going beauifupol

Is Rheann pronounced Ree-Ann? coz thts my first name, just spelled diffrently.. BUT AWESOME STORRY!!!!!!!! :D

i love this story to death! and i dont like vampiers but or me to fall in love with one like this proves how good it is!!

This story has such an interesting, intriguing concept. Usually, vampire stories are told from the other side, where the main character is either a vampire, or is loved and accepted by them, so it’s nice to see a story where that role is flipped, and the main character is an outcast and struggles with dealing with the prejudice that comes from that. I noticed that you use a lot of dialogue, and I would like to see a tad bit more description in the story, especially in the first chapter, so you can introduce the character’s looks and what they think of the world. I’d especially like to see you dive into Jade’s characteristics in the first chapter, without using all the dialogue, and instead using some of her thoughts and descriptions of the world around her. But overall, this is a really great story!

ooh!! Yes excited! Theres no way mibba gave you a virus!!!! Mines said i got a virus from my folders on my deskstop! :P

Keep writing for me!!! Ill make a youtube video about you nd your stories!!!

loved it!

Wait we "loved together on the outskirts of town" ? I think theres a error! :D

Wait we "loved together on the outskirts of town" ? I think theres a error! :D

This was epic! Loved it totally...holy crap! i love that name paired
Vladimir xXx Jade
cute and sexy!!!!! Cant wait for more!

MDMNSJFREDNFHJVBFNMEBFD YEEEEAAAAAAA! NEW FAV STORY!