This is solo good! Very well written, and I love how the story develops… this story actually touched my heart and would love to read more and see how the story develops!! Can't wait for an update…keep up the great awesome work :)
The new chapter was fantastic, I nearly jumped up and down in my seat when I found out you had updated so quickly. It was as beautiful as the last one, and yes I nearly cried again when she received that phone call, because I am prone to getting all emotional over stories I love. Seriously, two chapters and I am just weeping, eugh!
“To Ms. Joplin Harris, I leave my heart.”
It's like you want me to start sobbing. This was just so touching and I knew that Tony still loved her, I mean come on she's pretty brilliant. All that information on him leaving her literally everything in his will, even after 15 years of separation was just so touching and lovely.
You are really gifted when it comes to writing emotional pieces, everything is so eloquent and it flows and you can feel everything. The conversation about her age made me giggle a bit, Happy is quite funny.
You portrayed Pepper Potts perfectly, exactly how she was in the movie, and I just adore everything. I'm actually excited to see what will happen when they confront one another after 15 years, with both of them still having feelings for the other. It could go either way, they could be like: "Oh I missed you!" or they could start screaming at each other. I'm thinking more of the second option, because Joplin doesn't seem like one to give in and if she's still mad at Tony, she will stay mad at Tony. Haha, I love this woman. Sorry this isn't that long, but I will make up for it when I comment on next chapter yes? Update soon hun, this is so fabulous.
(Oh and you're welcome, you deserve the praise so you don't have to thank me).
Wow, this was absolutely brilliant. I nearly cried, dammit, your writing is so emotive and I could literally feel the embarrassment and sadness from Jo as if it was my own.
I'm so annoyed at Tony right now, when he was pleading with her I must admit my heart sort of ached a bit and I felt sorry for him, but he screwed up big time and I have fallen in love with the character of Jo so I must take her side. You have a flair for writing, maybe even a gift, and you are just fabulous darling. Update soon, this is just beyond words. I love it.