I Could Be Your Ever After? - Comments

I found your story through comment swap. I like the story concept, and because of this story I now like a new band. Even though I do like the concept I think that maybe it’s been used a lot in fan fic, of course I don’t write fan fic so I can’t really talk. I like that you picked a band that hasn’t had about five thousand different stories about them because I got to read about someone I don’t know a lot about as opposed to like Avenged Sevenfold, My Chemical Romance, or All Time Low. I mean there’s not anything bad about writing about those bands it’s just that like I said there are already a lot of them out there. I'd like to message you the rest of my comment. It’s really just going to be my honest opinion but I feel more comfortable messaging it to you.

I found your story through comment swap. I like the story concept, and because of this story I now like a new band. Even though I do like the concept I think that maybe it’s been used a lot in fan fic, of course I don’t write fan fic so I can’t really talk. I like that you picked a band that hasn’t had about five thousand different stories about them because I got to read about someone I don’t know a lot about as opposed to like Avenged Sevenfold, My Chemical Romance, or All Time Low. I mean there’s not anything bad about writing about those bands it’s just that like I said there are already a lot of them out there. I'd like to message you the rest of my comment. It’s really just going to be my honest opinion but I feel more comfortable messaging it to you.

I love fanfiction and comment swap led me to your story to comment on my thoughts of it. I'm not a MT fan. I truly have never listened to their music, but I have written fanfiction and I know how things should sound. Fanfiction is a far stretch, yet this seemed really really far fetched to me over all and reading it was just really unrealistic in a sense. You have a nice style, very very very detailed and your dialogue is nice. But your time progression is what I think you could work on. The MT fans definitely are pleased from what I see, so keep up the good work!!!

I love fanfiction and comment swap led me to your story to comment on my thoughts of it. I'm not a MT fan. I truly have never listened to their music, but I have written fanfiction and I know how things should sound. Fanfiction is a far stretch, yet this seemed really really far fetched to me over all and reading it was just really unrealistic in a sense. You have a nice style, very very very detailed and your dialogue is nice. But your time progression is what I think you could work on. The MT fans definitely are pleased from what I see, so keep up the good work!!!

I love fanfiction and comment swap led me to your story to comment on my thoughts of it. I'm not a MT fan. I truly have never listened to their music, but I have written fanfiction and I know how things should sound. Fanfiction is a far stretch, yet this seemed really really far fetched to me over all and reading it was just really unrealistic in a sense. You have a nice style, very very very detailed and your dialogue is nice. But your time progression is what I think you could work on. The MT fans definitely are pleased from what I see, so keep up the good work!!!

@ Kennedy71199
You'll get an update soon, I promise! (:

PLEASE POST! I just got really into this story! Please post? Pretty please? For Josh?

That chapter was amazing! I cant wait for the next. Hopefully soon!

Update soon I hope

Can't wait for the update!

@ AnneStarr
I will be updating really soon! :)) Thanks for the comment!

update please :)

Loved it!!! hope u continue