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  • RazzyVengeance6661

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    I can't wait for the next chapter!
    September 18th, 2012 at 03:47am
  • antivist.

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    Next! Next! Next! :DD
    September 17th, 2012 at 10:04pm
  • allicoleman

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    I am a huge fan of Pretty Woman, and I think you are underexaggerating when you say that this story is 'inspired' by the movie. It pretty much is the same movie give or take a few details. The whole point of creative writing is to make something your own, so I really encourage you to make this story your own and not completely base it off a movie. You have the writing potential for it so get creative!
    September 17th, 2012 at 09:45pm
  • Madam Shadows;

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    I LLOOOOOOOVVVVVEEE IT<3
    September 17th, 2012 at 08:25pm
  • inactive0888888

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    usually i don't read stories that don't have some type of nc-17 content in it.
    (wait..does this mean their wont be any smut scenes?)
    but... i sort of like this. cant wait till the next update! your on a roll girl :D
    September 17th, 2012 at 05:57am
  • antivist.

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    I like it! I'm looking forward to more!. btw: I love that picture of Gates! :33 He just looks so fucking cute!!! :DD
    September 17th, 2012 at 05:17am
  • fallen_angel94

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    U got some of this off of "Pretty Women" its not bad i like it. U just probably need to put where u got your inspiration from. I don't want u to get in trouble. But i do like where u r taking this story
    September 17th, 2012 at 05:15am
  • RazzyVengeance6661

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    I really like this so far! <3 Can't wait for more!
    September 17th, 2012 at 04:50am
  • Madam Shadows;

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    I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEE THIS<3
    September 17th, 2012 at 04:45am
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