Cry little sister..... Ha completely genius!!! I literally started singing the song the secong i finished reading that sentence. Anyways i love the story so far and absaloutly can not wait to read more of it. This story has great potential. I just love the lost boys so much... Honestly im kinda obsessed... Guilty. Lol anywho your an amazing writer i look forward to continuing the story. Keep up the good work!
The Lost Boys is my all time favourite movie, and even though David isn't one of my fave characters, I melted when I read this! I have a fanfic on here about The Lost Boys, thats a bit like this actually, but follows the events of the movie:)
Oh my gosh, best story ever! Please update soon! This is like a cliff hanger, and im so into this story! I expessially like the last part were david told her she looked good in his shirt, than she snapped back with "im keeping it" haha:) thats classic! So orginial! I love it:) please update this soon! I really want to read more!:D i love the lost boys, and i love david, so i was so happy when i came across this awesome story:D so into this david/ Own charcter story:) please update!:) cant wait for the next chapter!:D