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Ahh I hope she does get her birthday wish. Katie and Val can just grow up!!

Loved it! I just wish Val and Katie would just understand that they are meant for each other!

Love this! Can't wait to see what happens next. Hopfully Brian doesnt make a mistake and get jealous over Thomas.

Does She Still Like Bri? Does She Have A Thing For Thomas? Xc I Hope Not Agh Bloop Blah Brian And Eliza Haner Yes?

I love this. The more you update the better!!

It's so ironic that I'm reading this in an internet kiosk at an airport while I'm waiting for my flight :-)

Oooh little Short Shit's been blinded by the awesomeness that is Wiki already :p

I just love Eliza and Jimmy's little nicknames for each other. I think I like Cheese best, though Queerbait is running a close second :-)

Man, Brian's really got no right to be jealous but he's a typical man. Can't wait to read more

I LOVED IT! I don't have much of an opinion on Brian and Eliza; I mean, obviously they're not done with each other or they wouldn't be doing what they're doing. I think Eliza is happier without him. And I can't help being annoyed with Brian for getting jealous. Hello? Is he an idiot? By doing what he's doing, he's not permitting her to get over him, so she's not going to hook up with someone else. Gah!

Really good update! And yes Brian does need to find a way to get her back!!! Keep up the good work!

I love how everything is going right now with Eliza and Brian. I definitely think time apart for them is good,but its cute how they are trying to be all sneaky to stay in touch somewhat. Im excited for a halloween chapter, but even more excited for some avenged action hopefully soon. I hope you incorporate a little bit of katie and Zacky into this story..I love it. I cant wait for more.

I love the relationship Brian and Eliza have at the moment. Rebuilding their friendship and taking things one step at a time is probably the best route for them. And although I have a feeling that the others might not appreciate being kept in the dark when they eventually find out, it's got to be for the best, because this way it's between the two of them, no outside interference.
Thomas sounds absolutely adorable, and I can't wait to see the reaction to him when they all head off to Cali :)
Can't wait for more! x

I love the update, and whilst I'd love to see them back together it's good that they're taking it slowly. I don't think they should cut all ties like the others want them to, as it's like they're learning to be friends again before they think about jumping back into a relationship

Personally, I think it would be better if they cooled down, then sat down and talked about everything, and THEN got back into their relationship. Definitely do not want to see them over for good, but I guess that's all up to your discretion. I love the new characters, too, by the way! LoveLoveLove :) Can't wait for the Halloween chapter - update soon? 8D haha

Well...Brian and Eliza are kinda proving that they work better as friends. Just sayin'.
I love all of the new characters. Lol.
I'm so ready for the Halloween chapter. I FUCKING LOVE HALLOWEEN! Okay. Done. :-)

Brian and Eliza really are adorable. I hope that they;; be able to eventually work things out. Despite everyone wanting them to seperate for a bit and see whats out there, no matter what, Brian will always have Elizas heart. Theres no way around that. Wiki is awesome. I love her character! Cant wait for more!

Cute chapter! Excited for another Halloween chapter!!! Keep up the good work! :)

I got really confused when this popped up in my subs bar, like..what is this? And then I read the first line in the summary and literally started jumping on my bed. I lovelovelove the first chapter. Please update soon :D <3

Oh nevermind, I didn't see the scroll bar. *pouts*

Oh nevermind, I didn't see the scroll bar. *pouts*

I am number five! I want more!

You have been humored. Lol I still love it. Wiki sounds like a great addition to the band and in her life :) She'll never be able to let go of Brian, they know each other too well. Their relationship soind a lot like mine and my ex's relationship only difference is that he isnt as handsome as Brian , lol , and we have a daughter together. Keep em coming!