I Love You to the Moon and Back - Comments

@ tori with sirens.
No problem! I used to have that problem with my phone as well. :3

@ SchitzoFranic
You'll find out.tomorrow when.i. post the.second chapter! Sorry for.the over use of "." I'm on my phone lol

Cute idea for a story. I believe you should continue <33 It's funny, cause I have another fanfic in the making that has Jack with a girl named Riley as well ;3 But sadly, it probably won't ever come to Mibbe. But enough about my stories, back to yours. I really think this liitle prologue sums things up pretty nicely, you might wanna add how Jack and Riley came to be though. Maybe in the prologue, maybe as a memory in the story itself. Also, I have a question. Is this going to be more of a look into the life of what they're building now? Or is there going to be a fun little twist of fate that will test their relationship a second time? >:D

Hope that gives you everything you were looking for :3