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  • nighttchanges

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    I like this story a lot!! :D and just by knowing it's about Zayn makes me giggle. ;)

    update soon :D
    February 13th, 2014 at 04:09pm
  • prettypsyche

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    Nice to see that, in spite of her tough girl image, Nicolla is capable of being sensitive.
    August 31st, 2013 at 02:42pm
  • oh but darling

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    Dammit Niall. You cockblocker.
    LMFAO. But carrying on- I just love story. I just really like the layout tehe and the way you choose your words xx
    June 28th, 2013 at 06:32am
  • Kiakara17

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    Yay an update! xD Great chapter!
    February 24th, 2013 at 06:00am
  • prettypsyche

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    Dammit Niall. You cockblocker.
    February 18th, 2013 at 03:43am
  • cindycannibal

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    I was they would do the nasty...
    January 19th, 2013 at 07:54pm
  • big bad wolf.

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    What a way to leave us. I'm all hot and bothered now. lol can't wait for more. :D
    January 2nd, 2013 at 12:14pm
  • Kiakara17

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    Yeah update you just made my day lol
    December 31st, 2012 at 05:43am
  • Perrie Edwards;

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    Ahh, this story is completely amazing so far. You're an fantastic author and just asdfghjkl;. Update soon!c:
    December 26th, 2012 at 07:38am
  • Kiakara17

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    Im in love with story lol i need an instant update stat i hate how things ended like i feel so bad for Zayn. This is one of my favorite fan fict featurig Zayn lol
    December 26th, 2012 at 02:58am
  • lisamarieevans

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    I'm so in love with this story!
    December 22nd, 2012 at 08:37pm
  • big bad wolf.

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    update please! gracias.
    December 22nd, 2012 at 08:01am
  • the_space_between

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    Eeeeeeeep!!!! She likes him! It's about time they admitted it! I love this and hope you update soon! Can't wait to see what happens.
    December 20th, 2012 at 05:51am
  • invaderpayne

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    I really, really, REALLY like this. <3
    December 13th, 2012 at 01:12am
  • Caitosaur.

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    I feel like their eyes on the banner are trying to suck out my soul....
    December 12th, 2012 at 10:22am
  • the_space_between

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    Hmmmm...interesting back story. I'm very interested to see where this goes from here. Update soon!
    November 25th, 2012 at 08:53am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    Okay, I can't believe that you had the nerve to tell me that your stories were rubbish! Hahaha. This is DEFINITELY not rubbish.

    I actually really like your writing style. You're just detailed enough that I can sort of see what's going on, but you don't force loads of description where it doesn't belong.

    I also really like the dynamic between Nicola and Zayn. While a lot of writers either have the characters immediately fall in love or hate each other's guts at the beginning, it's really refreshing that Nicola almost seems indifferent. Sure, she's snippy with Zayn, but I feel like that's more just her personality than she just dislikes him for the sake of disliking him.

    And this might sound weird, but I like that Nicola smokes, too. I think most people who include Zayn smoking in their stories have a scene where the girl is griping him to stop because it's bad for his health, but that probably won't happen in this story, since she's in the same boat. Ha-ha.

    I have no idea why you don't have more recognition with this story. I think it's really promising so far. I can't wait to read more. :D
    November 8th, 2012 at 03:05am
  • MuchoGirl101

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    This is really good :) I can't wait for more, please update soon <3 xx
    October 8th, 2012 at 06:48pm
  • thelovelyreader

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    Really good! Will you please check out my fan-fics with the very wonderful boyband?? :-)
    October 8th, 2012 at 08:17am
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