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  • niahboo

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    please continue
    October 1st, 2016 at 05:24pm
  • ChaceCrawfordFan25

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    please write more
    March 31st, 2013 at 11:24pm
  • Stormborn

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    I like your concept but it seems pretty unrealistic to have him thinking about a stranger so much. It just seems a little bit out of character.

    But I think you're a good writer, the story is very readable.
    November 25th, 2012 at 06:50pm
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