You'll Be Missed, Miss California - Comments

Please update omg this is such a good fic

Pleeeease update! I really miss reading this!! T.T I've reread it three times !!! :3 <3

Hello~ I'm a new reader ! :3 I already love this gosh! I dunno if it's creepy but it makes me excited whenever jack kills someone lol XD I hope something good happens between him n Alex! u r amazing~~~ this is do intriguing lol

Just found this story, it is truly incredible and Jack does make me think of Moriarty. Good job! :D

This chapter made me so happy! I absolutely love serial killer Jack! Ugh, he's just so perfect! I can't wait until the next update!

This literally made my day omfg

Its ok that you hadn't updated. I'm sick myself. I can't wait to read what happens next. I just know it will be good.

I was so happy when you updated. I can't wait to read what happens next.

I love love love this so much omfg please keep updating i know it can be hard

Of course she'd be at Starbucks! Jack though...he's so vicious it's sexy & Alex...he's so adorably human it makes me smile. I can't wait until the next update!

Okay so i comment a lot and i probably sound desperate but holy shit i need more of this. This is like the best thing im reading right now.

OMG JACK! Is it bad that I'm like in love with him...even now when he's a crazy killer (Yeah, I'm one of those crazy girls that tend to fall in love with the attractive serial killer). I absolutely loved this chapter though. He seemed so nice to Alex for like a second then went back to being a complete dick. I love it! I can't wait until the next update!

I was so happy when I saw that you updated. Tbis story is so differebt and entertaining. I love it.

Wow okay this is so good. Shit just got real. I'm excited.

Please update i miss this!

damn girl! didnt think you had this stuff in your head!! :O

whoa nice!

Wow I'm absolutely obsessed with this. It's great

I love how he warned her haha and I think I'm a little bit in love with helpless little Alex.

I love this so much!