Put Me in Coach - Comments

Hiya there!

This story is seriously really cute. I loooovvveeee Tyler. Total Awesome beans. The switching of perspectives through me off a whole bunch, try alternating it by chapters, maybe that will make it easier for the readers, but other than that great story!!!!

I come here form the land of Comment Swap, and I would like to say that the idea is adorable, Tyler is awesome, and the story in general is quite cute. The layout distracted me a bit, and if you change chapters for the point-of-view changes it might be a bit easier to understand. There's a lot of dialogue, so if you put some more description in it would be awesome. I love the story though!

(Comment swap)
This story is cute. I, of course, like the character of Tyler and I think she and Zack would be cute (:
I agree with the below comment, I think instead of switching perspectives willy nilly you should alternate between chapters, not paragraphs. Also, the dialogue and then the descriptions right after can be confusing.
I only read the first 4 chapters, but I'll read more later (:

From comment swap:
Just a couple of things. I like your initial concept but I think it could improve things if, when you're jumping from different POV's, to start a new chapter then. Also, sometimes the dialouge is in the same paragraph as the action non-dialouge bit and that can get a little bit off-putting.
Other than that, very good work!

I love the update!! Update soon?

loved it!!!

Good story. More soon please?

awww i'n't he cute?
more soon?

more!!

thank you all for your comments. I will leave the suggestions open until next week, so if you have a person in mind, I suggest you let me know. The member with the most votes will be who the story ends up being about. However, you can't vote more than once. You can remind me as much as you want about your opinion, and that's fine, but it only counts as one vote for that person. If you really want a certain person, and you're really set on it, get friends to vote as well. The more the merrier!

Well I finished reading it and I love it keep 'em coming

I don't know if you've made a desicion yet because I haven't finished reading the story yet, but I think it should be about Zacky!! PLEASE!!!!!!!

Just started reading it and I love it already :)

intriguing...more soon?

loved it! :D

partyhardylady6661:

Zacky. The man barely gets enough credit as it is. do it.

Well, that's a lie xD almost 40% of the a7x stories on here are Zacky stories. Then there's about 30% on Gates, 27% are split between Jimmy and Matt, and the last 3% are Johnny. Of course, this is just my observation and rough guessing on it who gets the most stories out of them. But you all know I'm not far away from being correct xD

Johnny, Johnny, Johnny, Johnny, Johnny, Johnny, Johnny, Johnny, Johnny, Johnny, Johnny, Johnny, Johnny, Johnny, Johnny, Johnny, Johnny, Johnny.

Zacky. The man barely gets enough credit as it is. do it.

awesome

=OOO

Lol well I still say Zacky (love that man =] and if you decide not to use him..i want him lol..jaykay)

Loved =]

okay, well thanks. I will keep your suggestions in mind!