November 9th, 2012 at 04:03am
A Handful of Moments I Wished I Could Change - Comments
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LOVE this! :)November 9th, 2012 at 04:02am
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Sucks to say it but Gerard did have a point :\November 3rd, 2012 at 09:41pm
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Yay an update! Great chapter can't wait for the next ;)November 3rd, 2012 at 09:25pm
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@ Dystopia
I know the feeling. It takes me a awhile to update my stories because of the crazy hour s I have at workOctober 28th, 2012 at 10:21pm -
@ wildeyedjokers
Should be up anywhere from tonight to Tuesday, depending on school :3October 28th, 2012 at 10:13pm -
@ Dystopia
cool :) well i hope you post it soon :)October 28th, 2012 at 10:03pm -
@ wildeyedjokers
Next chapter is actually mostly Gerards dialogue. I just have to edit it and make it longer.October 28th, 2012 at 09:54pm -
@ Dystopia
Oh cool :) Well I can't wait for the sequel then. I didn't necessarily mean write in his POV for this story, just maybe when they talk have a little more of his dialog. But hey it just started and I don't know where you're taking it so what I said may be completely pointless lol. But anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. I love her personality :)October 28th, 2012 at 09:52pm -
@ wildeyedjokers
This story is going to be entirely in her point of view. Im planning two sequels, at the moment, one of this story in Gerards POV and another just as the continuation of this. :). Im going to get a bit farther on another story im writing and then start both of them. This one is just about written, at this point. I just need to find my notebook. -__-October 28th, 2012 at 09:44pm -
I like this chapter :) Although I would like to hear a little bit more of whats going on in Gerard's head. that's the only slight critique I have because so far he hasn't spoken much. But other than that I really like this.October 28th, 2012 at 09:41pm
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@ Dystopia
i have no problem with that lol. I hate when stories move to fast too.October 28th, 2012 at 09:27pm -
@ XxYouhadmeathelloxX
Haha xDOctober 28th, 2012 at 05:59pm -
@ wildeyedjokers
Thank you so much for all the feedback, it means so much to me. c: And it will more than likely be a while before they have a more than hate filled conversation- i hate when stories move fast with those things.October 28th, 2012 at 05:58pm -
Woah! Haha suck it Gerard lolOctober 28th, 2012 at 05:50pm
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its short but I like it :) You manged to capture so much emotion in the few paragraphs on the page that it's so easy to understand whats going on in her mind. I can't wait till the next chapter. I hope Julia finally ends up talking to Gerard. I want to see how that conversation goes :)October 27th, 2012 at 10:52am
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Thats cool:) I remember when I was like 14 me and my old best friend were convinced were were gonna move to LA and be room mates. I would tattoo and she who sing lol. Things didn't exactly go as planned though. I have an apartment with my brother and a shitty job, but hopefully I'll be able to start my apprenticeship soon. Maybe things will turn around then.
I can't wait until you update! I haven't been able to find any really good stories lately but I like this one a lot.October 19th, 2012 at 04:20am -
@ wildeyedjokers
Ive been wanting to tattoo for YEARS. Im waiting until January when I move to the city to try to find a good shop, Im moving in with some friends and settling down, if all goes as planned. I might be graduating early, so, lets hope, waha! And thank you so much, it really means a lot to see that people like my writing. <3October 19th, 2012 at 04:14am -
@ Dystopia
I know right! I've been wanting to tattoo since I was a kid. Now that I finally moved out, got a job, and I'm 18 I can do it. Luckily a shop liked my art enough to want to apprentice once I'm certified. Its cool you want to do it too :) I like meeting people who love tattoo as much as me.
I love your story btw :)October 19th, 2012 at 04:06am -
GAH! Please update! I love this and I was sooo sad when the last chapter ended. I hope you can write soon :)October 19th, 2012 at 04:02am
Thank you so much c: