The Night You Died - Comments

I love every little thing about this. It's so heartbreaking and emotional, but you know that. You also know that it's beautiful, but I feel like I should say it too, because it is.

Congrats on becoming a lawyer.

@ MadisonLynn
Thanks.

This is beautiful

@ saveyourheart12
Thanks. I really appreciate that.

I have never read anything as beautiful as this. omfg. This is perfection.

@ Smoothies
Omg. That just made my life. Seriously.

I'm so glad this is back. This is honestly so beautiful, and I actually brought it into in my creative writing class as one of my favorite pieces (credit to you, of course).

I love this. It's soo chilling, and sad. I love how it doesn't exactly give a hint as to who it's about, wither

@ Immy_Love_Adub
Thanks!

@ notweirdbutunique
Thanks for commenting. I really appreciate your taking the time to post again!

This is just gorgeous.

Like what Aquaria said, I remembered reading and recommending this. This is such a beautiful piece of work! I have mixed feelings of sadness and it actually sends shivers down my spine when reading this.

Thank you for bringing this back on Mibba again.

I remember reading this before you took it off the site. Reading it again was just as touching and beautiful as the first time. The way you detail things continues to astound me.

I particularly liked this line:

They have new packaging that you wouldn’t recognise. They started new promotions, after you died.

It seems like such a simple, insignificant sentence, but it really shows how much things have changed in the time that they have been gone. It represents everything that is different or new.

It was so short, but you said everything that needed to be said in those few words. This piece is absolutely perfect.