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  • H.L.A

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    You are taking to long to update
    November 12th, 2013 at 01:27am
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    Awwwww yay finally!!!!
    July 3rd, 2013 at 12:51pm
  • becca65

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    Please don't wait so long again!!!
    April 4th, 2013 at 12:22am
  • Syny

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    Oooooooh! It better damn work! She's smart ;)
    January 31st, 2013 at 03:17pm
  • becca65

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    Awww!!!
    January 25th, 2013 at 01:10am
  • Syny

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    Awhhh! He should just grab her face and kiss her! :3
    Brian best give him good advice :3
    Can't wait for more!!
    January 24th, 2013 at 08:24pm
  • Swampy

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    OMG they nearly kissed
    I wonder how Brian will advise him on how to get his girl
    More soon
    January 24th, 2013 at 06:43pm
  • Swampy

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    I hope Corbin will say yes to doing the picture and then they can get together because they can tell each other their true feelings. More Soon
    January 3rd, 2013 at 04:37pm
  • Swampy

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    I think Ronnie has a little crush on Mel ;);) It was so sweet with Corbin noticing the ring and smiling. The memory was also so sweet. Can't wait for more
    December 18th, 2012 at 07:02pm
  • Swampy

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    When I read that Brain had just left I was thinking no go back and talk to him and except him because it doesn't matter if he's gay and that's just what Brain did. I'm glad he's taking an intrest in Peyton's relationship.
    More Soon
    November 28th, 2012 at 05:36pm
  • Swampy

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    Corbin turning a little green???? He is sooooo in love with her but he should get the guts to tell her. More Soon
    November 22nd, 2012 at 07:44pm
  • becca65

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    Really want them to admit their love for each other! Younshould include their parents more. They seem to be alone most of the time
    November 22nd, 2012 at 06:49pm
  • Syny

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    Been busy? You liar, said you wouldn't update. >.>
    They all need to get laid. :3
    November 22nd, 2012 at 03:07pm
  • Swampy

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    Corbin shouldn't get so jealous because he doesn't have the balls to ask her out so technically he doesn't have the right to get jealous in the first place, I loved the double date it was so cute and I can't wait for more soon
    November 8th, 2012 at 08:14pm
  • Syny

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    I didn't get a bit teary, I bawled my darn eyes out!!! D:
    Buuut, other than that, great update :)
    Corbin and Mel need to fuck already ;)
    Hehe, I'm kidding, but seriously. He's so jelly and so caring. Ugh! So cute!
    November 8th, 2012 at 05:19pm
  • Swampy

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    Mel is being sooooooo blind I wish she would realise Corbins feelings. I ca't wait for your next update
    November 6th, 2012 at 05:30pm
  • Swampy

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    I love this story and I loved the prequel. I really wish Corbin would admit his true feelings to Mel. I cant wait for the next update
    October 24th, 2012 at 02:53am
  • MrsChristX

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    Love this story! ooh i think Corbin was jealous and that he wants melanie. Peyton and duston are so cute. Cant wait for next update Mr. Green
    October 23rd, 2012 at 06:43pm
  • Syny

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    Tehe nawh so cute, but Duston's is sad D:
    October 16th, 2012 at 10:04am
  • The.Nub.Nub

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    Naw at Corbin's cuteness :) they all need yo man up and be like woman (or in Peyton and Dustin's case) boy we be dating now so yeah.
    Never the less another great chapter :) can't wait for morw
    October 11th, 2012 at 05:57pm
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