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  • Alternateme

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    @ Skyscraper
    thankyou! :D
    October 17th, 2012 at 11:55am
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    Great job!!
    October 17th, 2012 at 11:55am
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    @ alexcarr11
    thank you very much!! Very Happy
    October 2nd, 2012 at 10:12am
  • Loudness War

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    You really turned the simple act of having a blindfold taken off into something great. Just like the title said, it really built up anticipation and makes me want to know what the person is going to see. Great job!
    September 30th, 2012 at 08:49pm
  • Alternateme

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    @ Fandango @ AndStuff
    Thank you so much the both of you. It really means a lot to know people enjoy reading what I write. Very Happy
    September 25th, 2012 at 03:09am
  • AndStuff

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    Wow! Cliffhanger ending, but very well done! In so few words you put a strong intensity together. You really turned having a blindfold taken off into an exciting, scary, intense, moving experience. Great job!
    September 24th, 2012 at 05:37pm
  • Fandango

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    Holy wow. This was really intense and wonderful. Great use of suspense.
    September 24th, 2012 at 01:44pm
  • Alternateme

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    @ Aprille Legacy
    thankyou very much! Very Happy
    September 23rd, 2012 at 07:29am
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    @ Alternateme
    You're welcome!
    September 22nd, 2012 at 08:32pm
  • Aprille Legacy

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    Ooh very nice. The suspense you built with such a short amount of words is very impressive. Nice work and good luck :)
    September 22nd, 2012 at 09:44am
  • Alternateme

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    @ backtodecember
    thankyou x
    September 21st, 2012 at 09:15am
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    Nice build up with the anticipation.
    September 20th, 2012 at 11:03pm
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