Chasing Visions - Comments

The ending was great and I loved both this story and the prequel so much. If you make another sequel, I'll definitely read it! :)

i read the first story montthhss ago, and i just found the sequel today i read it, obviously, all through and it was amazing! I love the ending. So much. Like. idk. Tommy went through soo much in the lasy two books and all the shit with Max and Tori and Calen, but the ending was beautiful. Truly a work of art to read, thank you. (:

I absolutely loved this! And it's prequel. After reading them both, I can understand Tommy and relate to him in a way. You did a great job of conveying everything he thought and felt, and I love how I got to know all the characters in a way. I hope you continue this with a sequel but if not, I'm also content with him leaving with Calen :) <3

I am so sad that this came to an end! I would love to read about Tommy and Calen, but if you chose not to do a sequel I'd be more than content with this ending. Everything fit so perfectly and all prior confusions I had with this story are definitely gone. Please keep writing! I love your work <3

Aw wow. The end, I can't help but shed a little tear. I think I might've commented once or twice on this, but most of the time I kept to myself because I wanted to wait until the end before I spoke up my thoughts on it.
Your characters are, in honesty, so brilliant. They all play such an important role in Tommy's life. I feel like I know Max, I know Tori, I know Fallo and Daelyn, and Judy and Laura, and Dakota, and Calen.
The most beautiful part of it all - is that I can't even begin to wrap my mind around Tommy. He's so incredibly troubled, and desperate, and unsure, and he's got the burden of a past that he can't even bare to remember weighing heavily on his shoulders at almost all times. He's yearning so desperately for love, compassion, and the right answer to life that he'll go so, so far to get there, often wrecking himself in the end. It's so tragically beautiful, Tommy's "life." I find myself yearning for him to get things right, I just want to scream at him do this or do that. It's like Skins UK, you just fall so deeply in love with the most tragic and fucked up of people.
It's truly brilliant, the way you played out your characters. You just made me feel EXACTLY how I was supposed to feel for them. You weren't cliche or unbalanced, it all ended perfectly. I'm glad he chose Calen, I couldn't be more than glad about his new life. It's hard for me to fathom that he's said goodbye to the good people that he's decided to leave, but I think rewriting his life was the right decision in the end. This one definitely pulled at my heartstrings. Thank you for blessing me with a wonderful read, I truly enjoyed the journey your characters took me on.

Don't stop writing, you have a true talent.

Oh, and the trailor was an aboslutely beautiful idea. It gave me chills. Everything, so wonderfully done.

Done ranting now, can't wait to read more of your stuff.

This story was so amazing. I'm really sad that Tommy left Dakota, because I loved Dakota, but I'm so glad he got away from everything and he can finally be happy with Calen. I really think this should be the end, because it was a great ending, but I'm kinda hoping for a third part. This story was truly amazing and I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories.

Loved the story, and I'm glad he got out with Calen. :)

I'm so glad that he's finally getting to be happy! I'm so sad that its over though :(

This story was nothing short of beautiful. You're an amazing writer, dear. Please do me a favor and never stop

Two amazing stories. Absolutley loved them both. Youre a fantastic writer.

oh and the trailer is amazing as well! :D

such a nice ending :3 the whole story was so amazing! it got so far from where it started. you did such a wonderful job on this! i can't wait to read more from you, be it more of this story or something new! :)

yay! whatever you decide to do, this was a really great story! i liked the ending, even if it was kinda sad... :D

Omg that was so sad :( when he told Dakota I felt so much like crying :(
but that was an amazing ending ... Well done, and please do tell us if you are making any other stories or a trilogy or anything, I want to read everything :P

Oh, the tears, that was a beautiful ending. I'm really sad to see Tommy go, to see him leave the few goods friends he had behind, nut I'm really glad that he gets to start fresh somewhere new. Thank you for such a beautiful story!

Awwwwwww! I'm happy that he's starting over :3. I'm kind of curious what he gave Max though. I feel like I should know, but I don't.

I'm in favor of a triology! Poor Tom :/

Oh my fucking God I don't even know what I would do if Tommy went to rehab and oh my fucking hell i just can't even think about this; i'm going insaneeeee deivbjoierbq;ocinkwds;ibvkjndsoacxnlkds.

trilogy! but, if you really don't want to, we're not gonna send a lynch mob to your house :D please contiue writing awsome stuff!

If you do a trilogy then that would be amazing, I dont want to say goodbye yet to Tommy :)
but if you arent ready for it or dont want to then dont stress yourself over it I mean hey, your work is so brilliant just tell us what your writing next and im sure we will all like subscribe to it and fall in love with that too :)