Accident Girl - Comments

I'm so in love with the way you write. You just have an unmistakably simple yet beautiful take on everything and I'm really jealous of it.

Wolfish and measured, his lips curl, and he asks me, “How many bad fucking habits do you have?”

“You should know,” I spit. “You’re the worst fucking one.”

Oh my god I loved those lines. Also, your characters are genuinely interesting and I love them already.

I love your writing so much asdfghhlk like how do I even put into words, my admiration? It's crazy how much I adore it, like your writing is so lyrical and poetic, and even in full stories you just have this really specific sound, maybe that's just me or maybe it sounds really creepy lol but yeah, this is very much amazing. Here is a very much late stocking stuffer for the holidays!

She’s no one’s fucking fault, especially not mine, but how do I save an accident girl? God, Jakob I don't even fucking know man, I wish she was a drug dealer too bc white rape vans make me want to throw up.

“Fuck you, I’m almost sixteen!” I think this is where I fell in love with Jakob btw, the raw cursing and the harsh words seems so very real and not the typical 'omg i'm so in love with her but its been like 5 mins what do i do' like Jakob is a tall gangly fucker with hair better than mine and I hope he doesn't do anything stupid later on.

“Are you stupid? It - you’re - how could it not bother someone?” second time i fell in love with wonderful little Jakob and his flying middle finger.

“You know... you’re pretty fucking patronizing for someone in a coma. okay puke I'm starting to resent you for making characters that are making me feel some type of way.

SO BASICALLY, this made my heart hurt (and a lot of things make my heart hurt these days) but your writing did a pretty fantastic job of doing it, and the brief chapters really work for you I think, they have such impact and ugh. Yeah, I'm definitely gonna have to look up your other stories after I'm finished delivering late christmas presents lol.

I've been following this story religiously for a little while now, so I figured I should comment on it. I've seen this story around Mibba so much, and I definitely know why so many people recc it. It's written so perfectly and amazingly, I can't even.

I love how sporadic, almost, this story is, but it still has a fantastic flow and narration to it. It's also incredibly unique and your writing style is very clear and precise, so that works really well together.

I love your characters as well. You don’t go into detailed descriptions to develop them, but you do that really well through their movements and dialogue, and ah. It’s great.

Lovely, lovely job.

Wow. I was actually blown away at how well you just pulled me into the story. Immediately I was like, "why does the narrator keep running into her and who is this girl they keep running into?" and I wanted to read more. So I applaud you on that.

Next your story is so unique and intriguing. I haven't read anything like it before and I just found it so interesting. Your writing style is very clear and refreshing. It's to the point, which I like. I like how well the characters develop, and Anja is such an interesting character. I like how Jakob is young but he still tries to be older.

Well done. This is beautiful and well written.

This story is so intriguing and wonderful. I can't wait for more <3

One word : perfection

You're easily in my top five of favorite authors on Mibba. Like very, very easily. You're so damn talented and all of your stories are so unique and have these mind blowingly fucked up characters that still end up just being beautifully tragic. I mentioned you as one of my favorite writers in one of my blogs and I mentioned the fact that you do messed up characters so well and I wish I could write them as well as you do. I think in a way I look up to you and your writing. Anyway, about the story itself. I really enjoyed this. Like a lot. I love how Jakob is younger. Usually in stories it's that they're the same age, but you gave that complex of him being younger, but more mature than his friends who really just don't understand the disaster of the situation. And then there's Anja who doesn't realize he's as mature as he is. You have his friends who don't see Anja for anything other than scum, which is so unfortunate. These kids are all disasters waiting to happen. That's why I love it so much. Another amazing story, my dear.

man i missed your writing a lot and i miss you tooo

First of all, I love you and your characterizations and your layouts and your writing style so this is going to be a difficult review to do without bias, but I'll certainly try. ok ok ok?

Layout

Beautiful, as usual. It's in a font color I can actually read without squinting too much, and the model (i'm not too sure of her name?) to the left is absolutely gorgeous. oh yes i'm excited. Jakob's also really hot.

Chapter one

It's adorable how Jakob's so concerned for her, although he shows it in an abusive-like, harsh way. He doesn't know her, but he cares, and I can really feel it. Jakob's just a sweetheart with a foul mouth, and it sucks that the girl seems to be pretty much a prostitute? And rape van oh god I laughed.

I wish I had more criticism for this chapter, but I don't. Oh lord this is going to be a hard review.

Chapter two

Anja is sassy, and I commend her for that, because Jakob has no fucking right to confront her about her own personal issues like that. It's her life, not his, and she pretty much says that and it made me mentally cheer. Jakob seems less like a sweetheart in this chapter and more like a snot-nosed shit. But he's my snot-nosed shit.

I can imagine Anja's characterization so well. Just so sly and snappy and she seems like she always has something clever to say — not easily caught off guard, yeah?

Chapter three

Jakob's friends are, obviously, immature, pretentious shitheads, but that's what you expect from sophomore boys, right? right? yup. I actually laughed at the joke Jakob's friend says about it costing more than her, and then I was so pleased when Jakob actually defended her instead of joining in with them. Jakob obviously has that little boy mentality that says that only he can be a dick to her, and although the feminist in me dislikes that, it shows he cares, I suppose.

And then him going in the girls' bathroom seems like his own way of a silent apology, although Anja seems to not appreciate it too much. And I wouldn't either but, hey, that's life.

Chapter four

Last chapter is, of course, the best. Anja has the decision to go with Jakob, and they share more of a moment, and although it's short it's so adorable. Jakob wants to show he cares, but he seems to young and immature to convey this, so Anja leaves him for this Cal guy, and that's the end of that.

Even the last sentence repeats how young Jakob is, and is pretty much the perfect ending to this story, although I am curious about Anja and where she's going to go from there. This was beautiful, but all the underlying sadness made it real.

I love you, babe. I really did try to find some constructive criticism, but I failed you. I failed you. /weeps

You say I'm one of your favorite authors on here, but you're one of mine.

aw i rarely go on mibba anymore and today was the one of the first times in forver and wowow i am so glad this story is so good omg???

jakob is so dreamy
you are putting everything so well and articulating things perfectly
man keep writing this!!

Here's your Duplo! (I apologize for the delay in getting you your candy D:)

Holy crap, this layout is so incredibly adorable. I've always wondered how people got their layouts that way, haha. For some reason, I think the picture of the girl (I think it's Kate Moss?) on the side really works for this story. It's cute and whimsical and I already love this, even though I haven't started reading this yet, haha. Anyways, onto the review. c:

Wow, what an emotionally charged prologue! I really like it; the language used is extremely abrasive but it works really well here. I also wonder my Jakob calls Anja "accident girl"; the plot thickens! I'm also curious to find out why Jakob feels the need to protect her, even though she tells him that she's not his problem. Do I smell a love story here? xD

Anyways, I really enjoyed this and I'll be patiently waiting for the next update! <3

i love it i love it i love it i do

i could spend time typing out my favourite parts but it was all grreaat yay <3