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  • Marinesister92

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    I got to this story through Comment Swap, so here i go:
    First, i was a little bit confused just because it started and I had no idea what was going on but you quickly took care of that problem. At some points it seems to be just the surface of the story with very little background information (i only got to part 3) like where they met, where the girls are from. I did like that you threw in that had she been in Indiana she would have shot the birds (fellow indianan).
    I was a little sad to not hear more about the traditions and how Kayla felt about them or how any of them really felt out. But I like it. It's a catchy story and a good read. You've got it figured out.
    -S
    December 27th, 2012 at 02:12am
  • RebeccaT

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    Lol he saw all of her lol I found this all very funny
    October 17th, 2012 at 03:12am
  • Juno

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    haha he saw her naked.
    October 15th, 2012 at 08:14pm
  • Juno

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    they're married! yaya!!
    October 8th, 2012 at 04:00am
  • SpencerG

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    Still mindfucked on their martial status but still this a good chapter!! *grins*
    October 7th, 2012 at 09:18pm
  • RebeccaT

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    Aww They are married
    October 7th, 2012 at 05:45pm
  • SerenaSerenade

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    This is really good! i really want addie and harry to be together!! ahh! haha keep writing!(: xoxo
    October 1st, 2012 at 06:49am
  • SpencerG

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    I can dig this. But it kind of freaks me out that Niall is already married by the third chapter. I need time to get use to the change.

    But fuck yes bitches!! I'm helpful!! *punches the air*
    October 1st, 2012 at 06:32am
  • RebeccaT

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    Aww
    September 28th, 2012 at 01:03am
  • littlemisslonely

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    I really like this story, I really do, but I don't think I can continue to read it if the wrong "your/you're" keeps being used. I'm sorry if I sound mean or anything, I honestly don't mean to, it's just that grammatical errors really, really bother me. On another note, so adorable. I'm looking forward to the next update. :)
    September 27th, 2012 at 11:07pm
  • luke ham ham.

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    love this! yay! they are finally married!
    i can't wait for more!
    update soon? (:
    September 27th, 2012 at 11:06pm
  • Juno

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    They're married!
    September 27th, 2012 at 11:03pm
  • the right girl

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    love this!
    September 27th, 2012 at 12:44pm
  • Juno

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    he won't run.
    i don't think.
    September 23rd, 2012 at 06:17pm
  • XNiallersPotatoX

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    i like this story <3
    September 23rd, 2012 at 02:23am
  • Pioneer.

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    Definitely excited to see more of this!
    September 22nd, 2012 at 04:58pm
  • luke ham ham.

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    I love this so far!
    I can't wait to read more. Update soon?:D
    September 22nd, 2012 at 04:01pm
  • littlemisslonely

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    I like this. It seems great. :D Except for that fact that you used the wrong form of "your/you're". That is the only issue I have with this. I'm excited for more.
    September 22nd, 2012 at 07:38am
  • Calum Hood ;

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    Ha! I like where this is going! :D
    Update soon? (:
    September 22nd, 2012 at 07:20am
  • Juno

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    subbed and rec'ed!
    love it.
    September 22nd, 2012 at 05:57am
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