When A Writer Falls For You - Comments

Here from Comment Swap:
First off, your layout is well developed and your writing is splendid beyond repair. You have a great idea about what you are writing as I can see and the flow of the material seems to be smooth. I think that your paragraphs could be expanded on a little bit more and with the bold ones seems to lose my attention the most. Your story however did indeed touch me a bit to reflect on my own personal life. But I would like for you to continue writing and come up with stories just like this one.

Here from Le Comment Swap.
Firstly, your layout is nice. But the writing is too small, it hurt my eyes when I was reading. Your idea is good, and your writing flows pretty well. I think your paragraph use could be improved a little, you have big chunks of writing which are quite boring to read at times. I think it's excellently written though, your descriptions are wonderful. Good job!

I normally don't read fan fictions, but this was absolutely brilliant. *Thankyou comment swap for bringing me here!* & Your writing style is amazing.. You could go so far with this talent of yours..

This was literally, one of the best written kpop fics I've read on Mibba. There aren't many EXO fics which I've unfortunately discovered but, this was simply wonderful. I've never thought of Jessica and Suho as a couple but this definitely made that idea relevant in my mind.

I literally don't know any other way to describe this other than beautiful. I loved it.

Your writing is very, well. Pretty :) The parts in bold were so descriptive and beautifully written. You are very talented.

"Happy endings don’t exist, for the most beautiful love stories are the ones that love and time keeps eternal." - So true and real and gah. I just adored it.

Keep writing! xx

I just decided to check your page and I clicked on this one because of its name.How do I start okay first of all I love your description you are so good at it seriously. I think this was creative and I really liked it. I am so checking your other posts

I come to you via comment swap!!! That being said, this story isn't exactly my cup of tea; I don't usually read this kind of story. That being said, I do think this was very well written and creative. It was also very descriptive, which I liked. Great job and keep up the good work!!