Loving the Lies - Comments

  • LullabyeLaura

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    This is pretty well written and I liked reading it :) Despite only reading the first chapter, the characters seem well- and realistically fleshed out so early on. I really hope you'll update soon, I'm very curious to see where this will go :)
    August 12th, 2013 at 10:04pm
  • littlebabyanything

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    "and Drew gave up trying to get used to it, and officially hardened toward Erik."
    Did you forget to change her name all over you silly girl? Or did I just miss the introduction of Drew? (It happens)

    PLEASE TELL ME ERIK IS NORWEGIAN. It would be awesome.
    September 24th, 2012 at 02:01am
  • Cynical.

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    I like this I hope to read more
    September 24th, 2012 at 01:36am