You're The One Who Shot Me - Comments

@ squidgyyo
I am rewriting this story.

Update soon????????? (:

I honestly can't blame Mike for being a "sourpuss." He's had to watch his brother go through all of this nonsense with Alicia and constantly get hurt by her...no wonder he's upset with Alicia. I would be too, if I was in Mike's position.

Well shit, I wanted Vic to move on, but not like this! I don't even know what to think about him and Alicia anymore. There's so many twists and turns in their relationship and it's all so confusing and tiring...and I'm not even the one in the relationship!

Good luck with your job interview!

This is probably just the romantic sap in me, but I was really hoping that Vic would cause some big, romantic scene in the middle of the airport to stop Alicia from leaving. Your way was more realistic, but still, I wanted to read some sappy, romantic junk!

Now that Alicia's gone, I'm really curious as to what will happen with everyone. Alicia, even though I'm a bit miffed at her, I'm also really concerned for her. I have the feeling Vic will either turn into a moping mess or a big manwhore. And poor Jaime, losing his best friend is bound to take a toll on him, too. I just want to hug everyone and tell them that everything will be okay!

@ selfish machine
They were so good! It was my fourth time seeing them and they always put on a good show. The perks of being local to the band I love. Haha.
Don't worry. Things will start looking up between them. :)

Shit, I'm all discombobulated because I read this chapter without reading the one before it and now I'm a bit confused and UGH.

I really want to like Alicia again. I loved her when this story first started out. I wanted her and Vic to work out and be happy together. But now...I kind of want her to just stay in Sacramento and move on with her life, and have Vic do the same.

Please, please, please restore my faith in these two's relationship! I want to want them to end up back together again!

How were the precious babies?! I wanted to see them so badly when they stopped by in PA last month, but that didn't work out. The line up was practically perfect for this tour!

I have the feeling that, after this chapter, I should be furious at Vic for what he said to Alicia...but I can't bring myself to be. He's in a tough position; his relationship with her is crumbling, which is causing her to spend lots of time with Jaime, her ex. That's enough to make anyone nervous and cause them to fly off the handle a bit. It was a bit much for him to call Alicia a bitch, though.

I'm getting to the point where I don't even think I want Vic and Alicia to get back together. It seems like all they ever do is fight, fight, fight and that's not much of a relationship. Maybe it'd be best for them to just move on.

Ahhh, I'm so excited for everything that's to come with this story! I'm really interested in reading the prequel to find out what happened with Alicia and Jaime's relationship. I have the feeling that they were a really cute couple. (:

I am so annoyed with Alicia right now. If she were a real person and I knew her, I would most likely punch her.

Maybe this is because of my complete lack of dating experience, but when starting a relationship with someone, I would think that you're not supposed to go around kissing other people. To me, doing that would give the person you plan to pursue a relationship with the wrong impression. So, if Alicia and Vic are supposed to be starting over, Alicia shouldn't have kissed Jaime, who just so happens to be Vic's best friend, even though she and Vic aren't "officially" together. That whole 'but we're not officially together' thing just seems like a weak excuse.

And then, as if it isn't bad enough that she kissed Jaime, she walked out on Vic to teach him a lesson? Look, Alicia, this is not school. You shouldn't be trying to teach anyone a lesson.

I just really want to punch Alicia right now. Really, really, really want to.

@ selfish machine
I know, the situation is only going to get crazier. This is when the story gets intense.

WHAT IS THIS NONSENSE?! ALICIA AND JAIME YOU KNOW BETTER THAN THIS! SHAME ON THE BOTH OF YA!

I'm so upset with those two right now. I just can't. Even though Vic has been a total dick lately, he doesn't deserve to have this happen to him. He's under the impression that Alicia wants to get back together with him, and then she's getting cozy with Jaime. This whole situation is just a mess.

Well...I'm not too keen on this starting over idea. I suppose it's the best option for their relationship to have a chance of working out, but still. Honestly, I just wish these two never got into this big ol' mess, and could just be adorable 24/7. But alas, that wouldn't be realistic or nearly as entertaining.

Oh gosh, Alicia's mom is a tad bit crazy. As much as I love Jaime in this story, I definitely do not think he and Alicia should date. They're good as friends, in my opinion. Alicia and Vic belong together!

Perhaps it's because I'm a bit of an emotional wreck today, but when I read about their "love child," tears came to my eyes. Those two are so precious.

Oh my goodness, and then their hug and the "And I will always love you." Are you trying to kill me with feels?!

While this chapter is giving me hope for the future of Vic and Alicia's relationship, there's a nagging worry in the back of my head that Vic is going to meet someone while on tour. ):

@ abc500
Ooh, that would be rather interesting now would it? ;)

@ selfish machine
Vic is messing up, I know. Haha. Even I want to slap him, and I am the one writing this. Hahah! Things might happen. A lot of drama could probably start.

Great story! It would be good if she met someone else while he was away on tour and he realised he shouldn't have let her go! Update soon.

No! This chapter is not okay at all! I mean, the writing and all that was good, but what happened in it is not one bit okay.

Maybe this is me being blinded by my wanting of these two to get back together, but I really want to slap Vic for telling Alicia not to wait for him while he's on tour. I guess he was trying to set her free or whatever, but he needs to stop with that nonsense. He needs to man up, tell Alicia how much he loves her, and call of this dumb break!

Again, I say that Jaime is so precious! His advice to Alicia was spot-on. She just needs to wait for Vic to stop being dumb.

Hopefully he'll stop being dumb soon, though, because I'm getting real tired of his nonsense. I'm curious about what he wants to talk to Alicia about. Maybe Mama Fuentes gave him some motherly advice during their visit? I really hope so!

Glad to be back on board! This is one of my favorite stories on this site.

Honestly, I just want them to be together and happy again. I know that this isn't going to happen before Vic leaves for tour, but it'd be nice if they were at least on speaking terms by then. I would just really hate for Alicia to spend the whole time that he's gone thinking that he's found another girl.

And yes, Jaime should bounce right back into her life because Alicia needs a good friend during this hard time. And since Jaime is super close with Vic, too, maybe he can do a bit of matchmaking with those two, wink wink nudge nudge...

@ selfish machine
Thank you for reading! You have been faithful to me since I started this story. Glad to have you back on board. c:

What would you like to see in the future of their relationship? What if Jaime bounced back into her life? Thoughts?