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  • cr3ature_

    cr3ature_ (100)

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    i really like this, a lot. it was beautifully written. please update soon, c:
    November 3rd, 2012 at 03:24pm
  • Tip of Your Tongue

    Tip of Your Tongue (100)

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    This story was wonderfully written - I actually didn't know that it was a fanfic (because I'm a little slow at times) until after I got to the flashing of the double As. All in all, it was a nice story to read, but I felt as though some of the phrases were repeated. For a reader, that gets a little bit annoying. But it was still a very pleasant read. c:
    November 2nd, 2012 at 02:50am
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