You're writing is Amassing , I wanted to cry as I was reading it , your description of the Characters it was captivating . . . . And wow
May 2nd, 2013 at 10:03pm
This made me cry so hard, I don't think you understand. The ending is what really drove me to insanity, because I had my fingers crossed the entire time, hoping to god it would be some kind of happy ending, BUT THEN IT WASN'T, AND NOW I'M HERE READING IT AGAIN WHILE MORE TEARS THREATEN TO SPILL OUT, BUT I JUST WANTED TO CONGRATULATE YOU REALLY QUICK ON THIS BEAUTIFUL ASS PIECE OF WORK.
On a more stable note, it's the way you describe Harry that instantly pulled me in when I first started reading, and I envy how your words just flow so elegantly together.
Louis wonders—as he lay in the arms of his love—if this is finally the end. There is nothing more either boy can do to keep them together; they’re gradually splitting in separate directions, and although it’s gradual, the pace is still alarmingly fast.
Harry remains still.
Louis feels like death.
There are so many words grumbling in the back of his throat, but he says nothing and tries his best at a smile.
Those lines are enough to keep me crying for the rest of my life. Thanks.
