Afraid of Reality - Comments

@ On My Sleeve
Thank you c: I know it's not my greatest piece,

@ Suck My Kiss.
You may if you'd like. c:

@ On My Sleeve
I know.. I realized that now, may I go back and edit it some?

Honestly, I'm not one hundred percent sure where this story was supposed to go or what it was supposed to... convey. I felt a little sad, but I don't think there was enough to it to actually get me upset about her. It just kinda seems a little empty to me.