I'm Not Afraid To Walk This World Alone - Comments

Wow thanks! Glad you liked it and thanks for the help!:)

Sorry! I hit submit before I was finished, guess ya get two comments...

This was cute, even though I don't really enjoy MCR fanfics or slash. Very sweet and simple and it was easy to picture in my head. "I missed you" <<< you should have a comma after "you."

In your paragraph about them getting home you had many run on sentences. EX: We pulled into the driveway of our house that we shared with the guys and ran inside and into my room, they guys were out so we had the house to ourselves. You're missing commas and you could have split that whole thing up into two sentences, I believe.

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We pulled into the driveway of our house that we shared with the guys, and ran inside and into my room. The guys were out,so we had the house to ourselves.

This was cute, even though I don't really enjoy MCR fanfics or slash. Very sweet and simple and it was easy to picture in my head.

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I have all of these feels now, Bailey, and their all your fault. I don't usually ship Frerard, but now I can't help but ship it, and ship it hard. It was probably too short for my taste, though, I wish there could have been more dialogue, or a part from Frank's perspective. You left off at a pretty good place, it leaves the readers with some ambiguity, which lets our minds wander and think about what could've happened next. On another good note, there was so much intimacy between Gee and Frank, you could tell that there was so much underlying passion between them, you could tell that they have a really chemical romance (hahaha). As always, really love your stories! Keep up the splendiforous work! :D - AnaTheKilljoy

Yay! Im glad you liked it. Thanks for the feedback it means alot :) I will definetly consider a sequel!! :)

This is cute. I like how you put Gerard into a position that most of us have been in - waiting for our loved ones to appear, feeling anxious and torn between the what if's and what not's. I thought it was a little fast paced though, I felt you could have drawn it out a little more and maybe being a little bit more descriptive. Otherwise, I think this is a good read and well written. Also, is there going to be a sequel, because it's definitely leaves potential at the end to a second part.

You're super cool :)

Omg that was super cool :D