its good. It's really weird cause for some reason i used to think up random things and i always pictured myself running into some hot guy at school and i got hurt and he saved me and stayed w/ me at the nurses (i thought of this when i was little) and i read your story and i was like HOLY CRAP ITS LIKE YOUR INSIDE MY HEAD. sorry if i confused you..umm..all you need to know is that its good. =]
That was awesome
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I can't wait for more!