Broken Hearts and Broken Hands - Comments

This was brilliant.. I feel a little heartbroken for Alex, and I'm just about ready to yell "What the actual fuck Jack?!" But I won't, I shall contain myself. This was really nicely written too. I enjoyed the panning between the flashback and the present. Not many people manage to do it and have a fluent feel to it, but you did it amazingly. I still wanna kick Jack's ass...and evoking such a feeling from a reader takes mad skills. So I take my hat off. You're good, this story is good and I'd look out for any of your other stories..

let me start with being the whiny bitch I am: JACK YOU FUCKER WHAT THE FUCK? COULDN'T YOU FUCKING SAVE HIM? my jalex feels are torn apart :\ but i lovr

It's so beautiful 0_0

@hannahsings9752 I tried to make it more dramatic ahah. But this entire thing is a big fail :0 Thanks though<3

Awww this is sad but like, a happy kind of sad i guess, I liked it but Alex went all ninja on a tree so that was bad and Jacky was being insensative but i still liked it anddddd I'm rambling, it was good and i'm shutting up now :-X