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  • Call_me_Dot

    Call_me_Dot (100)

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    This is such a sweet story (:
    September 26th, 2012 at 03:57pm
  • darlingdoll

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    I really like this story, the only thing to me was that he was ajusting to quickly? anyways...very unique storyline, glad I found this story :)
    September 26th, 2012 at 02:11pm
  • AndStuff

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    This is very sweet so far. I read both chapters and the intro. You need to change the p to in m, you wrote "On our ride back hope," if I'm correct you meant to write home. I like Dahlia, I'm sure that's what you were going for. Shane actually reminds me of a character in my story called Hope and her gift. Jerk of a dad and having issues with it. Great job! I really enjoyed it. Is there more? I will recommend it.
    September 24th, 2012 at 06:31am
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