I'm Yours Tonight - Comments

I am so into this, even though it's only 4 cchapters so far! I really hope you update this soon!(:

My thoughts about Celia: kill it with fire!
Zacky you need to wake the fuck up and get with Ari like...now. Please and thank you.

This is brilliant so far. Please update again soon x

I just love this chapter, well up until her bitch of a sister Celia arrived lol

It's awesome that she's getting on so well with Zacky's friends and he's seen that. I don't know what the hell he sees in Celia - she would have to be the nastiest piece of trash this side of the Atlantic. Bitch needs to come down a peg or two

I can't wait for the day that Zacky sees the light and dumps the bitch :-)

Oh man, this story is fantastic. I love Eli and Kai ^-^ I'm sincerely hoping that Celia falls down a hole or something similar so Ari and Zee can be together and whatnot. I want more <3

Oh god, I'm completely in love with this!
I absolutely despise Celia and Ari's mother, though. Such snobby people -.-'
But I found it really cute that Zacky always seemed to save Ari from the tedious parties :3 I was hoping he would remember her on Christmas party, but then I recalled they were wearing masks, and it's more exciting that he doesn't know she's the one who kissed him.
And her friends are soo cool! I laughed so much at their interruption on Christmas party xD I love them!

Agh, I'm just loving this story! Everything about it, from the characters, to the plot, to their encounters... God, everything's perfect :P

Please update soon! :D

"If only I had asked for his name that night… I thought to myself.

Yes, you should have, you silly girl! So you could kiss him again and again! Hahaha.

I don't blame her for dreading the party.. it sounds like a completely pompous affair that would be extremely boring... unless you had someone to sit there and make fun of the guests with, then it would be bearable. But since she's stuck on her own, it'd seriously suck and be the last way I'd want to spend my evening.

I really dislike her step-mother. She's such a hoe... with attention seeking ways and desperate need to be at the top of the social ladder. It must be so exhausting for Arianna to live with someone like her. I must say that I don't understand what her father could've possibly seen in the woman... he definitely made a mistake marrying her. It's just sad that he's not alive to see that

Argh, Benjamin Knight... man, does that guy make my skin crawl. What a creep! He's just so arrogant... he's very hard to take. But I suppose you wrote him that way on purpose. Haha. He's just such a wanker, he needs a good punch in the nose. I hope he gets one sometime through this story, preferably from Arianna herself. Or a swift kick in the balls... that would be even better

Kai continued, ignoring Eli as he listed off the numerous instances where Kai caused an inappropriate scene in public

I laughed at that, just being able to picture him rattling off the examples loudly and counting them off on his fingers with each one. Hahaha.

Zacky's entrance was very suave and classy... I love how he introduced himself and she was so caught off guard by realising who he was. The way she held onto his hand as she sat there all dumbstruck was cute.. but also embarrassing. Poor thing. hahaha.

Aww, how disappointing that he's dating her step-sister! She's a ho, why would he wanna date her? Pfft, he just lost some points in my book... silly boy.

Okay, he earned one of the points back by getting her away from BenjaDouchemin Knight... and for making him jealous without having to actually do anything. Bahahaha!

The boys entrance was just too hilarious! And I love their festive santa hats.. that was a very nice touch. Man, Gwen is just about to blow a gasket. I can't imagine the trouble the girl is going to be when she gets her hands on her after this evening... it's not going to be pretty. But at least she got out of there, that's the main thing

If that coincidence occurred again, it would go no further than trying to create a new friendship with someone interesting.

Well if that thought isn't going to come back and bite her in the ass, I don't know what will! She's gonna see him again, we all know that... and her crush won't be as easy to get rid of as she thinks.. I mean, the guy is incredibly hot

Looking forward to more, as always!

oh my goodness i positively LOVE this story!! that twisted cinderella feel is positively great. i also love her friends -- they would definitely be invited to my christmas/halloween party!! they'd probably be the main attraction. lmfao. i hope you can update soon!! loveee.

Oh pleeeeease don't make this update every other week or even every week for that matter!! I will die waiting for this each time!! Dx I love this story sooo much & i need more!!

I REALLY REALLY love this!! it had me laughing and smiling ^_^ her step mom & step sister are a biotch. This story def reminded me of Cinderella, but at the same time, took different turns. And i absolutely love that. you're writing is absolutely amazing as everyone else has said. I'm jelly xP

I loved this update and I look forward to more. Amazing job! I'm totally jealous of the way you write. :)

Call me crazy, but I'd rather jeans and a t-shirt over a ball gown any day! At least you can run away in jeans... not so easy in a long dress and heels. Hahaha. And her step-sister is automatically a bitch.. I can tell I'm just going to hate her... and her mother!

The room sounds pretty amazing.. I wish I could throw a party with decorations like that! It'd be awesome!

How tedious to have to put up with being set up with random men by your family... married off like it's 50's or something. Way to live in the 21st century, Winters family! She's pretty easy going to put up with it and play along, I don't think I could. It'd drive me nuts!

At least she's held out on joining the family business, though. She's following her own career dreams which is good, now if she could just find a guy on her own that would suit her, then she'd be one set girl!

Drinking straight from the bottle of expensive Cristal... that's my type of girl!

Argh, he sounds like he looks so good... and he looks good in my head! Trick or treat... tread indead!! And his costume is fitting, he's pale enough to pull off being a vampire... not to mention he could bite me any day!

"That's cute. Dracula trying to appease his mother's wishes," I laughed, shaking my head a bit. "It's so adorable."

Hahaha! That is adorable... even vampires abide by their mothers commands. Respect. Hahaha!

The scene with them sharing a dance and her literally falling into his arms was so cute... and perfect, especially since it wasn't cheesy, it was realistic since neither of them were dancing particularly well. The bottle of bubbly probably not helping... Hahaha. And I sincerely do not blame her for wanting to kiss him... stranger or not. When you're attracted to someone, you're attracted to them... not to mention the whole scenario would be intoxicating in itself. She should've just gone for it!

The second dance was adorable too! Good choice on their part not to attempt the waltz again, since it probably would've gone badly. Hahaha. And yes! She kissed him! You go girl!

Her exit was very swift, but definitely left him wanting more! Which is all a girl could hope for... yes, at this stage they don't even know one another's name... but I feel they'll cross paths again. Just a hunch I have. Hahaha.

Great start and I look forward to more!

I love the way you write. I look forward to the updates and seeing where this story goes. I know it will be amazing. :)