Bang Bang, He Shot Me Down - Comments

Is this a fanfic ?>.> Either way, I loved it ! Amazing use of imagery :3 You really painted a picture in my head of what was going on. I love the whole little kid to adult idea too, that was cute (: Fantastic job!! I'll subscribe! Please check out my story "24/7" for comment swap c: It would mean a lot to meee !!(:

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The summary was a bit off. I didn't really understand what was going on or what I was supposed to expect for the real story, but when I got to it, I was caught off guard. I really adore what this whole plot states. How everyone changes and how everything seems to be fine one moment but chaos the next when you start to drift away. I feel as if this piece relates greatly to many readers and I adore it a lot. I'm surprised this doesn't have as many comments as I assumed it would.

OMG! Is this a Mikey Way story? If so, that makes me even more upset. :( You did a great job with this. With just this one chapter, I feel like I got to know a lot about the characters. It's so touching. I didn't see too many mistakes. I mean, yeah, you do need to check with your tenses but that's it. :)