Amicus Mortis - Comments

The writing style, good lord, I think I'm in love. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

this story tho. omfg.

Okay what how is it even physically (or earthly) possible that I have not commented on this what feel free to send me a virtual slap or something.

I swear I commented on the first chapter about how your description of Evangeline is romantic on a dark way but evidently not, so here it is. It's like I have a thing for angsty stories where characters are fucked up but I adore Noah. Seriously. He's so pissed off and messed up and angry but at the same time you can kind of tell he's angry because it's in the writing. You can hear it in your mental reading voice.

I don't know how to feel about Evangeline yet (cannot bring myself to think of her as Evan in the comments SO I'm sticking with the full name) but I think something bad's going to happen to her. Otherwise the last sentence in the first chapter would not have been written. I like how it feels like the therapist is trying to get under Noah's skin and he doesn't really let her, but all Evangeline has to do is say something — or look at him — and she's already there and inside Noah's head and eating him up.

So I guess I don't really mind if there's a plan for this or not because even if it's just aimless and mindless rambling it's still perfect because you see Noah's flaws right away and they're not presented on a silver platter, they're in his actions and what he says and this is perfect ok ♥ ♥ ♥

To be honest I've been meaning to read this forever, but I've just never gotten around to it. I'm glad I did though. Again, I enjoy the slight humor you've worked into this otherwise serious piece. Your style just seems to have that natural air of humor around it. It never becomes to dark or thick because you always find a way to lighten it somehow. Kudos on that, sometimes stories are so doom and gloom I can't read them. This is a perfect balance though. Your use of description for Evan is perfect - she sounds absolutely lovely. I think my favorite part of this though was when Noah told the woman he hoped God could look away for about ten minutes a day so he could jerk off. I truly do enjoy your writing so much!

This, was amazing.
I do like the character of Evangeline.
She seems like the sort of person I'd write.
Almost.

Anyway, I really enjoyed this!
Enough that I stopped watching CaptainSparklez to read it! :D

(Don't know what to think of this.)

Honestly I didn't expect all the god references (or forgot any that might have been in the earlier updates whoops. ).
But yeah this is good (except for Noah being all moody, but that's sort of standard for your guys so it's all good gurlfran).

I'd say 'update sooooon!~~~' but I really need to get writing and I have other updates of yours to read. So update laaaaater!~~~

I love this and it's beautiful. Your writing is great and I didn't see any errors in it at all. It's nice, but I do wish the posts were a bit longer because you simply write so well, I know it can be developed. I definitely love the imagery you use to describe Evan, but I think that Noah is slightly undeveloped so I hope we see more of him. Keep writing<3

This has potential to be a very interesting story, I hope you will continue. :)

AWE SNAP WHAT'S GOING ONNNN

/too lazy for even a half decent comment
BUT this looks good and the updates are short and ugh I love it.

(Also I like the character page. Is that new or did I just never notice it before?)

THIS IS SO SHORT OMFG I CAN READ AND COMMENT BEFORE THE SIMS LOADS.
/love you so much right now ngl

I asked her if he’d mind tuning out on my room every day for at least ten minutes, because I didn’t know if he’d be comfortable with seeing me jerk off.
I CANNOT HANDLE THIS OMFG

Otay you've sparked my interest. That shit wanes pretty quickly. Don't leave me hanging.

So yeah done reading and the sims has made almost no progress. But yeah this is good and you should write it but you have like 348609734 other stories and they're also good so idek.
BUT YEAH WRITE SOMETHING.

/the 'awkward piggy awaaaaaaaaaaaaaay' thing is only funny once, right?

this is heart breaking damn omg

FUCK YOU AND YOUR PERFECT PLOTLINES.

that is all.

So, HOW ARE YOU SO WONDERFUL? This is only just a little bit for me to read. My mind is blown with how awesome your stories are.

You my dear, need to stop this shit. I cannot keep up with your awesome SO STOP WITH ALL THE NEW STORIES YOU FUCKER. I love you. This is brilliant and I'm fapping over that description of her lips.

Stop making new layouts and write your Jily story.
/ hark who's talking

Siriusly though, this looks good.