Ahhh! Total tease at the end! Goodness, I love this so much. For a non-oilers fan, I'm definitely loving this too much haha can't wait for the next update!
You talk about a slow simmer - well I think we are just about ready to boil over!!
Love the way you interject humour into each of your stories - your pop culture references and quick witty reparte remind me of reruns of Gilmore Girls. And your characters have very distinct personalities - all which given the information we have, seem very plausible.
But poor Jordan - trying to be the good guy here, but of course Taylor swoops in and makes him look even more like a noob. But Erin has his number - in more ways than one. She almost killed him in the restaurant -
"Mmm, Canadian. They say it's the best kind" - Yup, she really had him going there.
Wait til he lets loose and pours maple syrup over her and slowly licks it off - she may live to regret all this teasing...and then again, maybe that is what she is after!!