OH NO HOW DARE HE JUST SHOW UP LIKE THAT!!! NOPE, NOT BUYING THAT SHIT!!!! I love this. Happy reunions make me happy. But you know, then he shows up and I just don't know.
Another step closer to the real interesting stuff will happen.. Somewhere in my mind, it's telling me I should know what David you're talking about... So i probably be having a mini face palm moment when it's revealed... Oh well... Good chapter.
first officer in my brian: Hmmm I thinkl that this David boy will pose some problems second officer : do we kill him first officer: stand down soldier we'll have to wait and see want happens
Last crunch bar here! The layout/ banner is AWESOME! Especially the banner, I absolutely love the banner, partially because I'm a fan of Taylor Momsen, so.
Anyways, I really like this story so far, though I don't usually read this kind of stuff! You write with a good style, and I like that you space everything out! Overall, I like it!