Storm. - Comments

Ahhhh this chapter was so lovely and heartwarming and beautiful!! Like, I could feel their relationship getting stronger and it was so amazing, this chapter! It was, I admit, also a lovely little break from the drama they always find themselves in hahaha (even though I LOVE the intense moments that make me wanna yell at my screen hahaha) anyway another amazing update, looking forward to more sweetie!! <3 xoxoxo

OMG!!! Meeting the parents!!! o.O I cant wait!!!!! update soon... please?

Okay, this was nice. A sort of domestic bliss for Frank and Gerard. Even though Frank is still lying to his parent's he sort of told them the truth too. I think he really think that Gerard could change. ^-^

Oh and in answer to your question from your reply, I don;t know why you have not read my writing, but I should warn you that one of the stories is pretty dark, while the other is Rom Com with dark moments. Feel free to check them both out. I update about twice a week, usually one or the other. ^-^

@ Jazzrockedthestage
ikr fucking jepha >.>
haha yeah, frank first!
ik bUT GERARD JUST DOESNT KNOW HOW TO CHOOSE THE RIGHT WORDS poor baby
imtotallytryingtoupdateeverydaybutmehhh

@ JoviB
aw thank you !
i'm glad you enjoyed the chapter that much!! and i'd say there are around fifteen to twenty chapters left? something like that!
ah it's ok, your comment is cool and really nice so you can post it as much as you want haha

@ Futuristic_Pessimist
i know :c thank you!

@ TheWholeDamnRoom
everyone seemed to like gerard in this chapter haha! aw but frank's dad was worried and angry :(

@ Butterflyprincess2
haha yes, he wasn't very clear....
but frank won't be disowned i'm sorry :( although i'd like them to run away together, it'd be impossible for gerard to keep frank safe, and i really am bad at writing about running-aways haha
thank you for your comment darling, je t'aime.

@ SquiddyTheMouse
gracias! and i just updated! :3

@ momiji_neyuki
ohhh ok, thank you haha, and unngh why haven't i checked out your stories yet???? :o

@ VonnikanSkywalker
awawawa thank you so muchhhhh <3 and i just like it when badass!gerard's walls break down for frank so i just have to use it as much as possible for frank ;w; iDK I WILL HAVE TO UNSTUCK HIM BUT I JUST

@ Ayra Char
ayy thank you !!

@ You'reJustASadSong
oh yeah he really really is and i really want gerard to punch him, but then he wouldn't know when to stop and would probably kill him which is wrong because jepha's going to be useful later on :----)))

I KNOW i'm sorry i'm sorry, it's just, i can't fight the drama that sneak into the chapters every time ;-;

OMFG THIS IS SO CUTE AND FLUFFY I MEAN GERARD SETTLING IN A LITTLE COZY HOUSE WITH FRANK AND A DOG ANND AWW but yes, gerard needs to focus. thing is, travis' probably not his only enemy :/

just updatedddd sweetie!

Maaaaaaaaaannn, Jepha's a cunt. I opt for Gerard to punch him in the face.

I FEEL SO SORRY FOR FRANK OMG HE DOES NOT DESERVE THIS, MY BABY ;-;

Ronnie you's a dick. Can you just leave this planet, please, thanks and TRAVIS HE NEEDS TO GO TOO GERARD JUST CONCENTRATE ON THAT PLEASE KILL THE BAD GUYS SO YOU CAN LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER WITH FRANK IN YOUR CUTE LITTLE HOUSE YOU WILL BUY TOGETHER SO FRANK DOESN'T HAVE TO PUT UP WITH SHITTY PARENTS. KAY.

I'm looking forward to your next update c=

So so so so so good!!!

AHHH THIS IS SO INTENSE omfg Gerard cares so much for Frank it just breaks my heart ;-----; BUT WHAT IS FRANK GONNA DO?! He's stuck!! Another amazing chapter as always lovely!!! <3 xoxoxo

@ PedicuntRevenge
Oh no don;t get me wrong. You made the characters have RL personalities and that is what makes them likable like that. You would not believe how many readers yell at me for things that my characters do in my stories that seem so real! ^0^

It is a true testament to your writing skills, be proud please. ^-^

Love it <3 please update soon :)
Yeah, Gerard's gonna need to tell Frankie that he didn't kill Jepha

With that last sentence that Gerard said he will probably have to clarify to Frank what he did. If Frank were to be disowned, kicked out until further notice, or he were to run away would Gerard be able to take him in? Not that Frank would necessarily take up the offer, but still. He also is the type to run off in search of solace and end up in a bad situation. There is a vast number of possible situations and outcomes, but the one that matters is the one that gets written. You may not realize it but important things did occur in this chapter. I also believe that I managed to cause an actual freak storm with my last comment. As always Je t'aime.

AGHH omg I love Gerard right nOW ASDFJKL;
awe sho cutee
I hope Frank's dad falls off a cliff ^^
xoxo

Poor frank :( good update though ^^

Whatever - I'm the one who never post a comment - but hey, I wrote you one! And it was long :D
I was telling myself that I'll take a look on my 'subscribed' and here you go! ;D I was so surprise to see that you post new chapter so early but I don't complain! ^^
Anyway, back to this chapter. I think this is the best chapter what you wrote. All concept is good, really is, and as I told you earlier when I typed you my long comment, that there're some things that are repeating - like their arguments... But this chapter - is just my favourite one <3 Mainly the part when Frank talked with his parents. Also I like that you mentioned Gerards past and his sister.
On how many chapter you see it? I hopeI don't have solecism if I have - ignore it please :D
And please tell me why I post my comment three times and can't delete it? Fuck - I hate my slow internet!

Whatever - I'm the one who never post a comment - but hey, I wrote you one! And it was long :D
I was telling myself that I'll take a look on my 'subscribed' and here you go! ;D I was so surprise to see that you post new chapter so early but I don't complain! ^^
Anyway, back to this chapter. I think this is the best chapter what you wrote. All concept is good, really is, and as I told you earlier when I typed you my long comment, that there're some things that are repeating - like their arguments... But this chapter - is just my favourite one <3 Mainly the part when Frank talked with his parents. Also I like that you mentioned Gerards past and his sister.
On how many chapter you see it? I hopeI don't have solecism if I have - ignore it please :D

Whatever - I'm the one who never post a comment - but hey, I wrote you one! And it was long :D
I was telling myself that I'll take a look on my 'subscribed' and here you go! ;D I was so surprise to see that you post new chapter so early but I don't complain! ^^
Anyway, back to this chapter. I think this is the best chapter what you wrote. All concept is good, really is, and as I told you earlier when I typed you my long comment, that there're some things that are repeating - like their arguments... But this chapter - is just my favourite one <3 Mainly the part when Frank talked with his parents. Also I like that you mentioned Gerards past and his sister.
On how many chapter you see it? I hopeI don't have solecism if I have - ignore it please :D

Aw man, fucking Jepha man. I mean, I know he meant well, but man. smh That wasn't the way. And Gerard! I don't know, I found it sweet that he automatically felt bad for Frankie and that he immediately forgot about killing Ronnie! Idk man I'm weird like that xD But what buggs me, is the last line!! "Lets just say you don't have to worry about Jepha anymore." HE MADE IT SOUND LIKE HE KILLED HIM!! omfgareyougonnaupdateeveryday
causeidon'tthinki'llbeabletotakethat. BeingabletolookforwardtothatomgYESSSTHANKYOU
~Jazz

@ Jazzrockedthestage
hahah omfg blood ink, how uncanny !
TheUpdateIsHereHoney!
and i guess you just have to read c:

@ momiji_neyuki
yeah i know sigh poor frank, but maybe the phone conversation's not actually ending here....? -hint hint-
awwww i'm sorry, i didn't really base anyone on rl personalities, though. like, frank's not supposed to be a whiny bitch who argues all the time and gerard is not supposed to be an obnoxious bastard to the one he cares about so yeah.. but i'm sorry you find it unpleasant :/

Oh wow, poor Frankie is going to think that he killed or hurt Jepha or something. Gerard should not have been so cryptic. I really hate the portrayal, becasue his dad is awesome in RL, of Frankie's dad right now. He needs to pull the dick out of his ass and his mom needs to grow a pair! Sorry, lots of emotions right now. @~@

I have my pen ready, and it's filled with my blood. . . Where do I sign to kill this sonofabitch? (Omfg I'm so dramatic xD)
Icannotwaitforthenextupdatetobedramafilledletsjust
hopethatGerarddoesn'tbeanassholetoFrankjust
becausehe'sangryatRadke omgsomeonehelpme

~Jazz

@ Jazzrockedthestage
iknowrightomgiwaslikewhythehellnotupdateeverydayandthishappenedhaha
can we just start a petition against ronnie or something?

@ SquiddyTheMouse
Thank you, I'm glad you do ! Today is the new update hehe!
sign the petition above omfg

@ VonnikanSkywalker
i'M SORRY I'LL GET HIM OUT OF TROUBLE I PROMISE (crosses fingers >w>)
you'll knOW TODAYYYYY!! ILYM <3<33<<33
yES he needs to omfg let's kill the bitch.
and omfg yes you are as good as i think you're such a great author it's unbelievable !
and ik ik haha, i just guess i want to update more omfg (maybe to get over with this story haha ha h a)

@ WeWontTiptoeAbout
ikr fucking uptight parents goddammit
i think everyone here hopes that he dies haha

@ momiji_neyuki
ikr ? frank's so stupid sometimes.. but then, jepha wouldn't have played along, he's kind of against frank and gerard's relationship :/
mmmh... we'll see ;)

@ Butterflyprincess2
omfG i love your metaphor it's kinda gorgeous, just like your comments hehe. i'm so fucking glad you like it that much aw, je t'aime.