The Chance to Love Again - Comments

Very much

Good storyline by the way :)

One thing I always do is when i write a new sentence or a new paragraph i leave a gap between them by pressing enter on the keyboard, it makes your chapter look longer and it makes it easier to read for the viewer.
Also, maybe get a new layout, it makes it more enjoyable to read to have a nice layout to add to the story - you can find these on the menu bar when you are on stories:)
I hope this helps:)