Ana, Mia and Si - Comments

Hello <3 So I like what you're doing, esp. personifying the different problems. Just a few things: if you enter twice when you're starting a new paragraph, it'll look a lot cleaner and be a lot easier to read. Also, before you post things, be sure to check and double check for spelling/grammatical errors (to instead of too, etc.)
Otherwise, quite good! Keep writing!

No, it's fie! Don't apologize. Usually what I do is search my possible title and if nothing comes up I use it but if something does come up I change it.
Loved the update, by the way. I love how you personify the disorders. And the last sentence... boom. A reason to recover right there. Lovely job. <3

@ alison.wonderland
I'm sorry, of course I'll change it!

This is well-written and very accurate, especially with the sneaky excuses and how weigh loss comes before everything. Just one teeny tiny thing though - I've written a story about ed's and it's called "Ana" as well, so you might want to change that? Sorry, that sounded bitchy x 10. But people might get confused, etc.
Anyways, best of luck, and if you ever need to talk anything out, feel free to message me because I know how hard ed's can be. <3