Strawberry Milk - Comments

@ TwiggyPanda
coolio

@ Snow Horror
Your welcome! And thank you. It's a combination of my two nicknames.

@ TwiggyPanda
awe thanks... love your username by the way.

@ Snow Horror
Yay! And if you ever need help, feel free to message me lovely.

@ TwiggyPanda
i'm getting there slowly... should be done shortly, but real life is hecktic

Dude... You HAVE to update this!

and this one:D

loved it!!!
So you're an awesome writer and I feel like giving you a challenge(if you want to that is:D)
for the next chapter, give us 1,000 words:D

I've noticed that the longer I write, the better the quality seems, like I'm not just doing: event, event, event and it's more like a real story. I've gone through the 'writing stages' as I like to call it from a beginner writer, -exemplified in my story "I Can't Help Who I Am" and it steadily getting better until I'm at the stage where I am. For that story, I wrote like 300 word chapters and they weren't really that great, not much of a plot line, just random things going on. Now I'm adopting a 2,000 words per chapter rule and I feel like I've grown a lot because of the changes I've made to my writing.

So I think you should try out a 1,000 word chapter (again, only if you want) and see how it goes, challenge yourself:D
I'm on my second chapter now of the 2,000 words rule and it's tough but rewarding because I get a lot of comments, tehehe^.^

@ AoifeNiamh_666
yay!

@ I'mxJefferyxDahmer!
:O I read the latest chapter, I love it .... :D

@ AoifeNiamh_666
yeah... lol I have two more chapters on Shades, then it's ended! XD O.O

@ I'mxJefferyxDahmer!
Ahahaha whenever you're ready :D

@ AoifeNiamh_666
that's good... but i'm soooooooooo slooooooooow today. lol

@ I'mxJefferyxDahmer!
N'aww thanks :') I definitely will read it :D

@ AoifeNiamh_666
ok! XD Ima dedicate it to you in the summery, cause i wouldn't have thought to do it with out ya! XD

@ I'mxJefferyxDahmer!
Lmao ... okie ... I look forward to reading it ;)

@ AoifeNiamh_666
well of course, I has to update four stories and then I'll write the Mall shoot it up one. kk? since I promised it two days ago but sucks... lol

AHAHAHAHAHAHA! This just made my day ......... "Oh my fucking catnip" xP that's joke!

@ RaeTheDroog
Why thank ya. I means so much to know you all love it. Hopefully you'll forgive me for the lack of updating I've been doing...

This is such an original story!!! I absolutely love it!!