Who Knew Opposites Attract - Comments

Oh by the way. I wanted to surprise you so yea. Guess what Cheyenne? SURPRISE! It is me! I did read your story and I must say I like it a lot. You might be mad at me but hey I wanted to surprise you that I actually read. Also I'm surprised you didn't realize it was me because of how it says it's new and stuff I mean you should've known hahahahaha. Yes I did say I didn't make an account but... if you payed attention the way I said it was a bit different and less serious because I was trying not to laugh.

Oh by the way. I wanted to surprise you so yea. Guess what Cheyenne? SURPRISE! It is me! I did read your story and I must say I like it a lot. You might be mad at me but hey I wanted to surprise you that I actually read. Also I'm surprised you didn't realize it was me because of how it says it's new and stuff I mean you should've known hahahahaha. Yes I did say I didn't make an account but... if you payed attention the way I said it was a bit different and less serious because I was trying not to laugh.

Don't stop them. Let me read them :( cause your first story sounded great I just hope you didn't delete them yet.

im a bad speller always have been and also i was using my iPhone and its a touch screen so i must have been hitting the wrong letters and thanks for your comments your the first i was about to stop writing the story's i have but ill keep going with this one but im going to stop writing the other ones ill update soon hopefully

But hey like I said it's your first story but that's ok and I really hope you'll continue it. But I feel bad for Damon though because he likes her already but she doesn't like him and won't give him a chance. But of course its expected because she don't like anymore but that's ok. I'm sure like way later in the story she'll change and be nicer to him and yea I know I probably gave you an idea there but that's ok. But I hope you reply to my comment. Thanks and have a great day ^_^

But hey like I said it's your first story but that's ok and I really hope you'll continue it. But I feel bad for Damon though because he likes her already but she doesn't like him and won't give him a chance. But of course its expected because she don't like anymore but that's ok. I'm sure like way later in the story she'll change and be nicer to him and yea I know I probably gave you an idea there but that's ok. But I hope you reply to my comment. Thanks and have a great day ^_^

But hey like I said it's your first story but that's ok and I really hope you'll continue it. But I feel bad for Damon though because he likes her already but she doesn't like him and won't give him a chance. But of course its expected because she don't like anymore but that's ok. I'm sure like way later in the story she'll change and be nicer to him and yea I know I probably gave you an idea there but that's ok. But I hope you reply to my comment. Thanks and have a great day ^_^

Well you put tithe in one sentence I don't know if that's a mistake but it looks like one, then there's the part when The girl glare at me you were suppose to put The girls, then you put I went throw the day with people glaring at me, you were suppose to put Through, and you also put I walk throw them to the center of the group of trees, again you put throw instead of through, then you put in Damon's sentence and I thought it would be fun to fallow you. You put fallow instead of follow, and right after that you were suppose to put he says looking around instead of he say looking around. You also put fallowing in Sophie's character saying like she says if you don't stop fallowing me I will hurt you. I don't like being fallowed so stop it already. You were suppose to put following and followed. and again you putted I turn right and keep walking and he keeps fallowing. But hey it's your first story so it's ok :)

Well you put tithe in one sentence I don't know if that's a mistake but it looks like one, then there's the part when The girl glare at me you were suppose to put The girls, then you put I went throw the day with people glaring at me, you were suppose to put Through, and you also put I walk throw them to the center of the group of trees, again you put throw instead of through, then you put in Damon's sentence and I thought it would be fun to fallow you. You put fallow instead of follow, and right after that you were suppose to put he says looking around instead of he say looking around. You also put fallowing in Sophie's character saying like she says if you don't stop fallowing me I will hurt you. I don't like being fallowed so stop it already. You were suppose to put following and followed. and again you putted I turn right and keep walking and he keeps fallowing. But hey it's your first story so it's ok :)

so you liked it??? and what mistakes did i make???

Oh and please make more. Please it's really really good.

Ok you made a quite a few mistakes but that's ok because you wrote a great story and because its your first story as well. :)