Medicine - Comments

You seriously have this admirable talent for writing drabbles. I'm so jealous of it. The adjectives you choose and the descriptions you write are quite unique and amazing. I love every bit of every drabble you write, including this one.

It was short, and simple. Which is exactly the way I like my stories because I think you packed so much emotion in this one little drabble and I loved it. Even though it was short, we felt the span of emotions I would have felt reading a full story. Amazing job. The last line of dialogue really hits the reader in the heart.

Wow, this is so powerful. It's so short but it holds so much and I love that, I really do. It's concise and fast paced emotionally and it's perfect. It really made me stop and read it straight through (and then again a second time).

Happy Halloween, and thanks for picking some sweeties from my candy bowl, this really is a great little drabble. <3

I love how descriptive this was! It was like I could feel the emotions of the two main characters and what they were going through. I also like how it was really vague about what was happening to them. It was perfect for a drabble!