Laundry Day - Comments

Haha oh my god... this is amazing. Love it!

I absolutely loved this. Although you stuck to the prompt it wasn't anything like I expected. The characters were believable and I had a smile on my face all throughout. Great job!

this was freaking adorable.
i loved it.

This was really really good. I love the way you portrayed Niall, right down to the dialogue. I laughed through the whole thing, it was good.
You should maybe continue it as a full story or something though. I'd love to read that.

Well Cassie, why don' ya come and break in again on Friday? That killed me.

At first I wasn’t sure if you understood what fluff was, but this was good! Cassie is too cute. I could see Niall acting calm if a girl broke into his home while he was there, unless of course they were crazy fangirls. That was absolutely cute. You had me chuckling the whole time, with Cassie forcing Niall to wash his clothes properly and all of Niall’s comments. This would be good as a full story!

Thank you for entering! :)

This was adorable! Cassie was hilarious and had me cracking up throughout the whole thing. And bonus points for it being a Niall story 'cause he's my favorite. :D

oh my god, best short story ever. I couldn't stop smiling while reading it. It was so funny and cute!