Wow. Just wow. I feel like this story line is completely original and fantastic. Ivy is starting to annoy me though. She obviously likes Nathan a lot and should let him be there for her and support her instead of shoving him away. And he definitely should not be hooking up with other girls an pretending they are Ivy instead of just telling her the truth. And when you let on that it was her brother that Nate killed in the accident... That was heartbreaking. I actually started tearing up a bit. The fact that you can get me to create such emotional ties to your characters in such a small amount of chapters really let's on about your writing abilities. I can only aspire to be able to get my readers to connect with my characters the way you do with yours. If you don't continue this story, I think I might cry. Please continue and finish it! You are such a talented young writer and really need to keep up with the writing! I am definitely subscribing! Ugh! I am so excited to see what you have in store for Nate, Ivy, and even Nina. If you could please check out my newest story and comment that would absolutely make my day. So brilliant! I can't praise this enough.
July 23rd, 2014 at 05:00pm