The Dilemma. - Comments

@ alextmarshall
w00t!

@ CynthiaElzanne
i'm about to now :)

@ alextmarshall
Did you read it?!

@ CynthiaElzanne
sweet, i'll read when I get home n.n

@ alextmarshall
about to post a new chapter now!

@ CynthiaElzanne
Oooh keen! Aw, I hate it when that happens!

@ alextmarshall

woot woot. I'm finishing up the next actual chapter right now. well at least trying to.

@ CynthiaElzanne
Ya! Aw, well I loved it =D

@ alextmarshall
That really means a lot on this one. I literally pulled it out of my ass. I felt bad for not posting in so long when I was first getting chapters out every few days. and I know. But I feel it adds a bit of drama to it.

Wow, lovely chapter. Ahh poor Josh having all this put on him and he can't say anything :-(

@ saveredheads and @ mibba.92

Thank you both so much! c:

i love it :)

I just found this and I absolutely love it!

@ alextmarshall
woo you get it!

@ CynthiaElzanne
I know what you mean :-)

@ alextmarshall
yes. I like have to think differently when I go through the chapters at times because that way I see it differently. I don't know how to explain it.

@ CynthiaElzanne
Oooh nice!

@ alextmarshall
I do it once or twice each chapter, and sometimes I even get a better ending out of it.

@ CynthiaElzanne
That's so smart. I updated a chapter to one of mine today and i added a few things in, it still wasn't very long lol oh well :3

@ alextmarshall
Usually if I feel my chapters short I'll go through and read it from the beginning and put in things like Oh this would sound better here, and like edit it is, and usually that will make is longer.