Wow, you published it on my birthday and a year later, here I am commenting on it! I think it was fate.
Anyways, I enjoyed reading this! I love Tony's character and I think you described and portrayed him well, it makes me wish that him and Lisabeth had longer interactions with one another. That and I wished she could have gotten some time with the rest of them, but it's all about Tony right now so I don't mind. I loved the lyrics between each new scene, I think it helped set the mood, and I would give anything to hear Tony sing a song.
This was so much fun to read!! I really enjoyed all of the action and the ending was perfect!! It really wrapped everything up and I like how you fit the quote it! You did an amazing job!!
Anyways, I enjoyed reading this! I love Tony's character and I think you described and portrayed him well, it makes me wish that him and Lisabeth had longer interactions with one another. That and I wished she could have gotten some time with the rest of them, but it's all about Tony right now so I don't mind.
Great job on this!