Write It Down - Comments

I'm crying! Poor Jack... how can Alex do this? Gaaahhh!

I don't want Alex to hurt Jack. But it's part of the story. :/

Aww that was cute but kind of ominous with Alex's thoughts and whatnot, I'm dying for more!!

This is so awesome! I can't wait to read more, I love it! :)

In love with this omg

This is perfect.

Alex better sort his shit out and not hurt Jack
I love this sO MUCH

I just love love love this so far even though I would like to give Alex a stern talking to about all of this lying >:-| can't WAIT for the next chap!! :)

I don't even know what my feelings are doing right now.
All I know is, this is perfect and I need more of it in my life.

It definitely was! I just feel so sad because Jack deserves so much better :/ he's so sweet, he needs someone in his life who'll actually care about him. It just bothers me how Alex is using him.. but hopefully things will change and Alex will realize he's being a douchebag lol

i second the previous comment. even though you just updated, i'm in love with this story and i'm already sad for jack because i have a bad feeling that this will not end well for him :(

THIS IS REALLY GOOOD NOW WRITE MORE! CHOP CHOP!

No Alex don't you see how useing jack will be horrible when he finds out

update update update update update update NOW, this is so good so far holy crap :')

Dammit dammit dammit write more this story is addicting, I can sense where you are taking the plot and it's delicious! Please please please write soon oh my <3

ah oh goodness. i love this. Alex using Jack will backfire.

<3

This is so good omg

Ooh I didn't even see that coming!! Poor Jacky being used by Alex. :'( BAD ALEX! <3 this! update soon! :)

Awww I feel so bad for Jack

Very interesting plot. I like it :)